Not my world or characters, new characters will be added later. They however are mine, don't worry they will play nice with existing characters ;)
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Jack sat in the briefing room, he was doodling and really not paying attention, but hardly anything unusual there. 'Went to P3X...something or other, found some new rocks, encountered a Gou'ld ambush, new lot, Oh thank you Daniel, with the god of the dawn?? No wonder they were glowing, however someone should have told them glowing armor and an ambush are two things that shouldn't go together. However the ambush acted like an easy training exercise, kept the planet from getting dull.'

Jack suddenly looked down at his paper and had a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach, since the General had just dismissed them and and they were walking out of the briefing room he turned to Sam. "Carter, Have we been to this address?" Passing over the pad to his second in command.

"Sir? No the address doesn't look familiar to me, I will have to look at the dialing computer to see if its on there. Sir, if I may ask, where did you get this?"

Jack sighed, 'That of course is the question, where did I get it from?' it felt important but he had no idea why. "I just drew it, I have no idea. It may be nothing." 'Oh great, she is giving me that look, I wish I could lie to her better, whats the world coming to when a commanding officer cant lie to his second in command?'

"OK Sir, its not in the dialing computer, its probably not a valid address..." Sam's voice trailed off, looking at her commanding officer. 'Uh oh, this look has gotten us out of trouble before but that is when we have been on the verge of disaster, and its always been a far fetched idea that accompanies this look.' "Sir, Ill talk to the General about trying this address."

"Um, Carter, I think he should make this one a priority." 'Damn why do I know this is a valid address. Could I have been compromised? No. We know Urgo is gone for good and I haven't been away form the team off world any time recently and Im the only one who seems to have a feeling about the address.'

"Sir, while I'm talking to the General, I suggest you go and talk to Janet, you know the General will require this before he gives any kind of go-ahead."

This brought a chuckle from Jack, "And you dont think me willingly turning up to the infirmary asking to be checked for alien influence will be considered a sign of that exact influence? However it'll keep Janet on her toes. Well if you want me, you know where I will be." Jack walked out of the control room heading for the infirmary. 'There was more logic behind that than normal, why the hell am I going to Janet with out any fuss, what is so damn important about getting to this planet quickly? At that, who is wanting me to get to that planet?'

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I know its short but this is my first fic and I want feedback as to what people think about the style and comments about improvements before I continue, it will also depend on if people want the story to continue, there will be no romance and I will be introducing a new race with new abilities so i suppose its AU but with the same background.
Thanks Major Carter, this separating of thought and word better?