Chapter 1:
Ella got up from her royal bed. She had a terrible dream about her children getting eaten up by demons from hell. Ella had 4 daughters and 3 sons. The oldest of them all, Eleanor(age 14) named after Ella's mother, heard her mother screaming and woke her up.
"Mother! Mother! It's past breakfast time! Are you okay?" Eleanor squeaked. Ella finally stopped screaming.
After five long minutes, she said "I'm fine, dear. Have you had breakfast?" "Yes Mom."
Her other children heard her mother screaming. Chelsea(8), Roseann(11), Emily(10), Sam(13), Charlie(13, Sam's twin), and Ben(6) rushed to their mother's room. "We heard you screaming," Charlie exclaimed. "What's the matter?" "Oh nothing" Ella sighed. Her children were too gentle. Sometimes she wished they weren't too gentle all the time. Finally, Chelsea held out a cake in front of her mother's face. "Happy Birthday!" Chelsea said meekly(Chelsea was the most shy of them all). Ella had forgotten it was her birthday. "Thank you all!" She smiled. "You may be excused." They all left. *****
Since Ella missed breakfast because of her laziness, she went to greet her prince. When she met Char, Ella gave him a light kiss on the forehead. "Morning," they whispered to eachother.
Ella went off to the kitchen to greet Mandy, the cook. "Happy birthday dear!" Mandy jumped excitedly. "Hope you had a 'princessly' nights sleep," Mandy joked. "I'm so happy for you. Oh! Can't forget your trip! Happy for that too." Wha? Ella couldn't understand what Mandy was saying. Why was Mandy happy for her? What trip? She could probably answer her first question, but definitely not the second. She wondered mysteriously and a bit frightened.
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How was the first chapter? Please reeeevvieewwwwwwww(review)! Also, please put ANY suggestion if you have any. I'll do the best I can to help make the story better :)
Ella got up from her royal bed. She had a terrible dream about her children getting eaten up by demons from hell. Ella had 4 daughters and 3 sons. The oldest of them all, Eleanor(age 14) named after Ella's mother, heard her mother screaming and woke her up.
"Mother! Mother! It's past breakfast time! Are you okay?" Eleanor squeaked. Ella finally stopped screaming.
After five long minutes, she said "I'm fine, dear. Have you had breakfast?" "Yes Mom."
Her other children heard her mother screaming. Chelsea(8), Roseann(11), Emily(10), Sam(13), Charlie(13, Sam's twin), and Ben(6) rushed to their mother's room. "We heard you screaming," Charlie exclaimed. "What's the matter?" "Oh nothing" Ella sighed. Her children were too gentle. Sometimes she wished they weren't too gentle all the time. Finally, Chelsea held out a cake in front of her mother's face. "Happy Birthday!" Chelsea said meekly(Chelsea was the most shy of them all). Ella had forgotten it was her birthday. "Thank you all!" She smiled. "You may be excused." They all left. *****
Since Ella missed breakfast because of her laziness, she went to greet her prince. When she met Char, Ella gave him a light kiss on the forehead. "Morning," they whispered to eachother.
Ella went off to the kitchen to greet Mandy, the cook. "Happy birthday dear!" Mandy jumped excitedly. "Hope you had a 'princessly' nights sleep," Mandy joked. "I'm so happy for you. Oh! Can't forget your trip! Happy for that too." Wha? Ella couldn't understand what Mandy was saying. Why was Mandy happy for her? What trip? She could probably answer her first question, but definitely not the second. She wondered mysteriously and a bit frightened.
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How was the first chapter? Please reeeevvieewwwwwwww(review)! Also, please put ANY suggestion if you have any. I'll do the best I can to help make the story better :)