Yay! Another time wasting poem I wrote. This is a tribute to Demyx, whom I aspire to become, the Melodious Nocturne, but I have a long way to go. Yes, please read and review.


A lone flute plays an empty melody

There is no heart or soul in the music

Yet still it breathes, still it plays

Finger fly along in a well known rhythm

A tired sigh echoes around

A soft smiled graced his lips

He knows his time is near

Yet the music never stops

No, not till the last note plays

He plays to the moon and it's empty stare

To the stars that bathes him in an angelic light

To the earth, which his empty music fills

The sun that banishes the shadows

The air that fills his now gone lungs

And the water, the empty replica of himself

A calm wave, a deadly tempest

Now an audience gathers, sneering at his nothingness

Still he plays, waiting patiently for his time

The light shines upon him and he smiles

Finally remembered and saved

His audience feeds on the shell he leaves behind

As the last note plays


Please R&R as mentioned before. I never get much recognition for my work, so anything is appreciated.