Chapter 1: Lonely
Hi! Well this is my first story so I'd love if you give some advice on my mistakes, cause I'm not a very good writer! I know that it's confusing but it'll make sense, hopefully!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own the show Doctor who nor do I own The Doctor, Rose, or Martha.
Bad Wolf Bay, Rose Tyler sits a year after she saw last saw The Doctor. Just waiting for that familiar noise the TARDIS made that was music to her ears. She waited, eyes closed, nothing.
O
In a cave not so far from Bad Wolf Bay, there was a light blue box in what seemed to be a block of ice. Why wasn't it melting, it was a hot, windy day? Why was it there? There was a small crack in the ice, then, suddenly a bright yellow light from the inside. The block of ice blew up and all was left was that blue box. A pre-teen girl came out; the light came from her necklace. "About time"
O
"Where are we Doctor" asked a young woman in a red leather jacket. "Well Martha, we we're supposed to be in Texas, 1836, in the Alamo. Though it appears we're in some sort of ship." The Doctor said. "Maybe we should go back then, because this place is a bit creepy." "Martha, you've known me for about a year now surly you'd know that anything creepy, scary, and haunted, exciting adventures like that, is what I absolutely love. SO let's just walk around see what we find, eh?" he said with a big grin. "Of course, that's The Doctor an idiot that's going to get us both killed." Martha said rolling her eyes.
O
Rose opened her eyes, the caved a couple yards away from her blew up, and there was ice everywhere! She ran to it, it was an adventure to her, and she couldn't resist. She walk into a pile of rocks which used to be the cave. She hadn't realized the cave was this big; it looked miles and miles long. She walked slowly, and looked all around her for any clue or sign of what was going on.
It was getting dark and then there was clumps of ice everywhere, she walked really slow now, no telling what will happen next. "Just like old times, except without him" she said to herself about to cry. When a loud bang came from her left. Rose stopped, she now realized that she wasn't alone.
A bit more scared now she walked on, it was too late to go back she was on an adventure and nothing could stop her.
Rose was wondered if it was the doctor who caused all this commotion maybe he had found a way to come back to her and just had a bad landing. She could just imagine, him coming out of the TARDIS with that same pinstriped coat and that goofy smile saying something like "did you miss me". God she had loved him, more than anything.
Ouch" rose said she had bumped into something, she took a step back looked up and saw a big blue box, a huge grim immerged on her face "I knew he'd come!"
PLEASE R&R I'd like it if you told me your opinion on it