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"Finally, school's out and it's summer vacation!" I said as I stepped out of the school's front door. My name's Saeko, (sai-ee-koh) I'm 17 years old, "I can't wait to get home from this boring dump." I said looking back at the school, I wore the everyday girls school uniform, (like the ones you see in anime) grey nike's, and white socks that reached up to the center of my shins, I have vibrant ocean blue eyes and long dark blonde hair that reached down to my lower back. "I wonder what I should do first during this summer vacation." I checked my cellphone and saw that the time was 4:35 PM, once I got home I was hoping to my parents shortly after because they were finally coming home after 2 months away from home on business and they promised to come back on my birthday which was today.
(she turned 17.) I grabbed my Ipod and started listening to some music, then my cellphone began ringing on my lap, thankfully it vibrates at the same time as doing it's ringtone otherwise I never would've noticed. " hello?" I answered the phone. "Hi sweetie." my mom said over the phone. "mom? How's it going I can't wait for you to get back home." I said excited bouncing a little on the couch. "we're sorry sweetie, we won't be coming back after all for another month."
She said with regret in her voice. "what? But you promised that we'd be together for a 3 day weekend." I said. "I know we promised but our boss wants us too stay longer for this business trip." my dad said coming in on the conversation. "so you're going too stay for the sake of your jobs?" I said starting too get angry at my parents. "no sweetie, it's for the sake of all three of us." my mom said. "so you're staying longer 'cause you find your jobs sooo important?" I said with my eyes filling with tears. "no, we want to make you happy, but sometimes we have too do things that we regret." my dad added in. "oh so you want to make me happy? If you really wanted me too be truly happy you'd come back for my birthday. But no, apparently your jobs are more important then your own daughter!"
I then slammed my cellphone closed hanging up on them and threw it too the carpeted the floor, I brought my knees up too my chest and started too cry, listening too my Ipod too try too think happy thoughts. But I just couldn't think of anything I started too cry louder, hoping that a miracle would come around and make my birthday worth staying around for. However instead I heard something come from upstairs, I went up too check it out, it was coming from my room, I looked around the corner of my rooms doorway slowly and just saw a strange purple square sitting right there in my doorway, it had a strange swirling pattern releasing purple particles, and made a weird distortion sound. I leaned in slowly too get a better look at it, before I knew it, it started trying too suck me in, it sucked in my bag already and my Ipod touch. I tried to grab onto my door frame too stay in my house, but before I knew it, it started pulling harder, and then finally I lost my grip and got sucked in, falling through a strange purple tube feeling the air growing thinner and thinner.
And before I knew it I could barely breathe and passed out.
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