Hello readers! How are you? I hope you guys do fine, don't be like me here, all strained. =,,=
And Ciella Aberk~ Thanks for my Beta-Reader! (Straightly and Unstraightly nya~)
But nah, I wrote another fict about Roxas and Namine again. Yeah, I knew I'm lame .. But at least you guys could read and enjoy. :)
Feel free to give me critics and reviews, if you guys felt that this fiction is worth to be commented ...
Sorry if I still make mistakes at the grammar and clichés .. I guess I'm not good at those things ... /isbeingkickedbythereaders
I wrote this fiction when I happen to read Twilight. But .. It's nothing like it, maybe just about the vampires part. Just a maybe. You could read it full if you want to know. :)
And almost of this fiction is P.O.V-ed by Namine. :3 I hope I don't do any Out Of Character ..
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts aren't mine. And will never be mine. ;P
...
... Where am I?
... It's so dark, I can't see anything.
... Wh..what's this smell..?
"O mächtiger Könige, Willkommen in Ihrer Welt! O mächtiger Könige, Willkommen in Ihrer Welt! ..."
What's that voice ... A ... Requiem?
"N..A..M..IN..E,"
I gasped as I turned around, trying to find the source of the voice who called me.
"N..A..M..IN..E,"
That's voice roaring again. Somehow, that voice just hurts me.
"Namine,"
Another voice appeared, it's clearer than before...
"Who are you?"
Suddenly, a faint light came upon me, and ... I gasped, I'm in terrible shocked .. What.. Is this...? Where.. Where am I..?
There are bloodstains .. Everywhere, around me! My dress .. I touched it ... And then I realized that my dress .. It was also full ... full of blood ...!
"... Herrscderrzeit," a familiar voice .. Whose voice...?
"Emperarteil..." That brave and yet, a boy voice continued ...
*SCREECH*
"Akh!" What's..that screech..? Erkh ...
"Die Könige ... Hiermit vor mir!" An unknown language roaring the scenery ahead, but yet, I felt that I knew it, I felt that I ...
Am the connection between those voices.
What else do I saw ...? Corpses everywhere .. All bloody and terrifying... But a boy is there ..
He's standing! Standing with pride and so brave and he's wielding his sword-alike-weapons on his both hands.
And Bloodstained ...
Wait .. He's staring at me ...
Pair of deep cerulean orbs ... Staring at me .. They're beautiful but ..
In the same time they looked clouded.
Clouded in sadness.. Clouded of despair.. And my heart just hurts when I sees them.. It just like ... My heart is being sliced open.
"Die Könige ... Hiermit vor mir! Seal! Verschließen Sie alle! Ich erkläre Ihnen ... Rückgängig es!" He spoke the language ... The voice ... It's full of ... Sadness ... Like he was going to die ... Die right away ...
... The shadow in front of that boy ... 2 shadows .. They're huge ... Yet, I felt demonic power inside ... And there is a girl ... Sprawling on the pool of blood. Pointing her fingers weakly on that boy ... Like a wicked power came from that weak finger.. And she ... Looked like me..? What's this...?
Her blue sky's eyes ... Staring intensely at me, but her eyes .. Didn't have it's light anymore.
*SCREECH*
No...
Stop this ...
I can't stand it anymore ... NO! Stop this!
"Stopppp!" I shout ... Suddenly .. My vision is getting blur ... The boy .. Stared again at me, his cerulean eyes are looking ...
Happier than before.
Fuih, I just wanted to write about the prologue this short, I can't believe it outcome as expected! Hmm .. Let me see, I knew I lame .. But I needed ancient or other language than English .. So I used translation engine to do it, it's in German and so sorry if there are errors ... Okay, flame me if you want T^T
Okay, this is the real meaning of the words that written with German.
• O mächtiger Könige, Willkommen in Ihrer Welt!: Oh mighty Kings, Welcome to your World!
• Herrscderrzeit: the origin from 'Herrscher der Zeit Darkened' mean: Ruler of Darkened Time.
• Emperarteil: origin from Empera, what I mean for Emperor, and 'Urteil': Judgement.
• Die Könige ... Hiermit vor mir!: mean: 'The Kings ... Hereby before me!'
• Die Könige ... Hiermit vor mir! Seal! Verschließen Sie alle! Ich erkläre Ihnen ... Rückgängig es!: The kings ... Hereby before me! Seal! Seal All! I hereby you .. Undo it!
There! I hope the translation not do so bad, and and ... RnR if you want to. :)
Oh, I want to ask questions:
Should I ...
•). Make this story a bit dark, scary or to romance + cliché..
•). Namine is sadistic or indifferent ?
Oh well. I need the answers ...
Your help is really required! :D
-alice