Blackfang

I hear that I need to state that I dont own Pokemon, I Just made this story.

Ch 1 theUnlucky Stantler

The air was chilly on the Stantlers nose as it ate the dew covered grass in the early morning. Pines, junipers and oaks surrounded the small meadow where it stood and the sound of Tallow, Pigi and Swellow were light upon the air as they swooped up Caterpi and Wheedle for there morning meal. As the deer pokemon ate its ears were forever twitching in fear ready to hear the slightest sound of danger. But even with all of its listening it didn't realize that it was being watched..

Suddenly there was a snap as a twig broke under some animals paw only ten feet away. The Stantler started running in the other direction blind to the fact that it was surrounded. Jumping out of a patch of grass to the left of the beast two wild dog pokemon a Houndour and an Electrike roared and made the Stantler almost trip over itself as it turned the other way. They were right at its heels barking and growling. The Electrike jumped and grabed a hold of the stantlers leg which made it fall for a moment. The Electrike shot a small spark at the deer pokemon but it quickly jumped out of the way and gave a hind kick at the small electric dog knocking it into a small tree. The other one Houndour, came around the front getting ready to use a flamethrower but the stantler jumped again out of harms way and started running towards the edge of the forest. the houndour followed but not being a fast runner it could not keep up. The deer had almost gone into the forest when another presence quickly jumped in front of it.

"Houndooomm!"

Before the stantler knew what happened. A gigantic black dog pokemon with a whip-like tail and rams horns stood before it. For a second the deer stood terrified as the dark figure stood with all its dark power emitting from it. The black dog howled then rammed into the horrified Stantler, grabbed it around the neck and held it to the floor. The poochyena came running in and held the struggling creature down as the large black dog got ready to kill it. There was acrunching noise as he broke its neck and severed its windpipe. He lifted his head slowly The electrike came running even though it looked like it had ingered one of his paws and bowed down before the Big Black dog

"I congratulate you Blackfang. You are a true master hunter." the Houndour said bowing down at Blackfang's feet. It spoke

"Good job sir."

"Thank you Voltaire, but you know that both of you helped immensely."

Hephesta smiled. " you are welcome sir."

Are you alright Voltaire? She asked as she nudged the Electrike to lay down and rest.

"Im fine, just pulled a muscle that's all." he said quietly.

"Excuse me a moment" Blackfang quietly said to the two of them as he walked towards wherethe stantlerhadbeen standing alittle while ago.

"Come out Lobo! I know it was you who spooked the stantler." he said with pretend anger in his voice. Then out of a bush not five feet away a little black dog, although not resembling a houndour or houndoom with big paws andwhite stripesacross its back. he had a fluffy white tail that he was betweenhis legs in fright as he slowlywalkedtoand sat right down in front of Blackfang. He gave a whimper from fright then quickly spoke. He was a black Growlithe.

"I am sorry Blackfang. It wont happen again." but blackfang did not speak all he did was smile.

"Do not worry Lobo, I am not mad. This is only your first big hunt and it is ok to make mistakes." apparently this surprised the little dog pokemon because he looked up at his blackfang in wonderment.

"The only thing you must do is learn from your mistakes." he paused "like I had to when I was a pup." he patted the little puppy on the head for a moment "So tell me what your mastake was." he said even more gently than before.

Lobo thought for a moment then looking up hesitantly spoke again. " I made noise in the bush."

"Good, now tell me what you could have done different"

" I probibly could have been watching my surroundings more" Lobo said speaking with a little more bravery.

"Good, see, you know what you are doing. all you kneed is a little bit of practace.Now let us go back to Hephesta and Voltaire and go get the rest of the pack. I am sure your father would be happy to know what a fine son he has." he smiled again then started walking towards the leafy trees.

"Sir?" Lobo said quietly as he followed.

Yes?" Blackfang replied without stopping.

"How did you become so wise and strong?"

Blackfang paused. "well I was not alwase as wize and strong as I am now. alot has happened over the years."

"Oh please tell me sir.I want to be just like you when I get older." with that he ran and pounced onto Blackfang's back.

blackfang smiled"Alright I will tell you, little Lobo." He smiled and laughed asLobo hung onto his back like a little apom. "Just get off of me first."

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Ok so I started this story a few years ago when I was bored in english class so it probibly isnt that good but it turns out realy good later on. I hope I will be able to post the rest of it but right now I am realy buisy with school and dont know when I will get a chance. anyway go ahaid and review. I even take flames so whatever. ; ) Oh yea and after this the chapters will be much longer because I know people dont realy like short chapters.