some minor revisions made concerning the names of the superheroes. I just realized that "Mrs. Incredible" and "Incredigirl" are lame!!!
Sky Blue Goes With Blood Red Swirled In Violet
Chapter I: End of an Emotional Drought
A door opened and a shadow cast over the floor an uncomfortably dark and quiet room. The shadow was thin and so was the atmosphere. With every step the shadow took, the tapping noise grew crisper and clearer. The door closed.
"Maybe I shouldn't have done that," pondered a teenage voice as she continues walking into the darkness. After some distance she shouted. "I know you're in here, Mars!"
"Of course, you know I'm in here, Invisigirl! But do know where I am, exactly, hmm?" shouted a dastardly voice that echoed through out the room distorting the origin of the sound.
"I'm sure either Mr. Incredible, Elastigirl, or The Sonic Youth has beaten your partner Venus by know somewhere in this lair of yours so you might as well give up, Mars!"
"How can my love be beaten if she's right here by my side?" The lights suddenly turn on, blinding Invisigirl. When she could open her eyes again she saw her family in the center of a large, shrinking green colored force field, they looked like they were screaming to her but it wasn't audible. On top of the force field there was a floating metallic platform that was supported by four beams and there was a tall man wearing a red jumpsuit and a woman in a yellow jumpsuit standing on it. The room was vast and behind the platform and the force field there appeared to be a large rocket ready to launch.
'Rule one when faced with a predicament caused by a villain...umm', thought Invisigirl as she tried to remember a joke conversation she had with her dad just last week, '...oh yeah! Get him monologuing!'
"What is exactly your evil plan, Mars?" fished Invisigirl.
"Well, I thought you never asked! Well, after your companions are violently obliterated as a side-effect of coming in contact with this intensified laser force field, I will launch...'
As Mars started to talk with his eyes closed with Venus listening intently, Invisigirl disappeared and started approaching the ladder that led to the platform Mars and Venus were standing on. The family appeared to be jumping up and down and cheering but wary of the shrinking force field which was slowly shrinking and now only twice the size of Mr. Incredible's huge body but suddenly...
"Did you think that I would let my love to monologue while nobody's listening???" said Venus while she managed to capture Invisigirl with her zero-point energy ring.
"hmmm!?" grunted Invisigirl incoherently as she couldn't move her mouth. She made herself visible again and it was apparent that she had been caught in a quite uncomfortable position. She was sneaking on the ground on all fours and now she was "sneaking" in the air.
"Why the heat sensors monitor the place see. And I can see you right here." said Venus pointing at something at the control panel, presumably a monitor. Then she moved Invisigirl quite effortlessly, having her speeding body right straight to the deadly force field. Venus jokingly advised, "Next time don't monologue, dear."
"Oh, alright." said Mars.
But as Invisigirl was sure that this would be the end for her and her family...
"There won't be a next time, Mars and Venus" shouted a heroic yet slightly cracked voice. The words filled the enormous room triumphicly. Suddenly, Mars' head snapped back by the invisible punch to the chin that knocked Mars off-balance and almost fell over the railing of the platform that saved him from diving into the deadly force field.
"What the..." before Venus can finish her sentence with a graceful curse, she was apparently gutted in the stomach and doubled-over clutching her stomach. This effectively freed Invisigirl from the figurative shackles of the zero-point energy and ran up the platform ladder, rushed to the control panel and pressed a button labeled 'Turn off Extremely Dangerous Force Field'
After saving her family from immanent death, she noticed something weird on the heat sensor monitor. It showed three warm bodies climbing up to the platform, possibly her now free family, and four warm bodies on top of the platform. "That can't be." thought the teenage super out loud, "There's only me, Mars, and Venus here." as she looked at the two unconscious bodies on her left and right.
"You forgot me!" said a boy with a similar crack that the mysterious voice had. "Umm...I wish I can introduce myself but the papers haven't given me a name yet. By the way, nice to meet you. What's your name?"
Invisigirl was stunned. "My name is Vi...no, Invisigirl!" she said as her voice faltered as she recovered from the shock and almost telling him her secret identity.
"Ok, Invisigirl, I must leave you now. But not before telling you how beautiful you are," the boy kneeled and kissed her hand gently. "Good bye, beautiful." the boy vanished as his voice was weakened by distance he said, "You can take credit, if you want to..."
Invisigirl was left staring to space as she hadn't fully comprihend what just happened during the past 30 seconds, she was immedietly woken from ponder Dom by a shriek of relief from Elastigirl's a.k.a. her mother's voice, "Are you OK, Violet? Did they hurt you?"
Her dad, Mr. Incredible, patted his daughter in the back quite harshly but Violet was getting used to those and understood that her dad can't control his super strength at times. He said, "Good job, Violet! You sure kicked butt!"
Her brother The Sonic Youth was less exited, "Ah, I'm sure can do better..." than he pouted.
As The Incredibles returned home to their town via a government sponsored jet from Mars and Venus' lair that was located in an island in the middle of the big, blue ocean, Invisigirl or, as she's most comfortably referred to, Violet was spacing out to the view of the horizon trying to make sense of what happened.
'Who was he?' she thought, 'What did he look like?' After a while she found out she had no vivid memory to recall about the appearance of the super that saved her, and her family for that fact. All she remembered was..."Sky blue..."
"What was that dear?" asked her mother, Helen, from her seat in the front of Violet's with a maternal voice.
"Oh nothing, mom. I'm ok." said Violet dismissively.
"Maybe she was just thinking about Tony..." mocked Dash emphasizing the word 'Tony' with a baby mushy-mushy voice.
"You say that one more time..." but before Violet can finish her idle threat...
"C'mon Dash. Let your sister be, she's the super of the day. Lay off, at least for today." interjected Bob in a distinctively deep, paternal voice.
"Oh alright." pouted Dash.
For the rest of the trip, Violet was left thinking, '...Sky blue...hmm...sky blue...'
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