Who thinks the official Camp Rock ending (if you could even consider it an ending) sucked? Well I do and this is how I think the movie should have gone! This takes place right after Tess reveals Mitchie's lie and then Mitchie and Shane literally cry in front of each other which was my favorite part of the entire movie.

We're Done, But It's Not Over

Chapter 1

"This is real, this is me. I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be. Gonna let the light shine on me," Tess read aloud to herself in the cabin. Her hands gripped onto the yellow book and her smile was unavoidably contagious. Just a moment ago, she had spilled Mitchie's lies to the entire group of campers including Shane Gray- her next target.

Shane had been looking for "the girl with the voice" ever since he was chased down by fanatic girls and tripped into the bushes by the mess hall. He listened to her singing, her voice echoing out the windows. With each hit of a piano key, it lured his heart into the mysterious world of a girl whom he didn't even know. Campers were now throwing themselves at him and Tess was just about ready to make her own move. But now she knows the truth.

Tess closed Mitchie's notebook and slipped it back under the mattress. A smirk spread across her face, "Oh Shane, just wait. I'll be your girl. You'll find me."

"Tess what are you doing?" someone said as they loudly walked into the cabin. Tess looked up and the smile was wiped off her face.

"Peggy, could you not stomp in here like that. You sound like a horse," Tess retorted irritably. Peggy just rolled her eyes and fell back onto her bed with her eyes closed, humming an original tune. Tess scowled and strutted out the cabin with her charm bracelet dangling at her side, reminding her that she had to focus on her Final Jam plan.

Mitchie jumped up the stairs and walked into a room that suddenly turned quiet. Everyone looked at her with a cold stare and all Mitchie wanted to do was crawl into a dark hole where no one could find her. She bravely stepped forward and closed the door behind her, only to have Tess unkindly break the silence.

"What a joke," she said with her arms crossed and an evil smile. Mitchie's expression fell and her eyes looked at the floor. She felt nauseous and would've vomited right into Tess' hot pink Juicy sweat suit if it weren't for Shane who quickly came through the doorway. Avoiding Shane, she cowered into the corner and slumped down the wall. She held her legs to her chest and rested her chin on her knees, trying to block out the whispers.

Shane walked through, "Hey guys, have a seat." His warm tone was a change since the beginning of camp. He was no longer a jerk, a rockstar with a bad image. He was just a lost boy, with a damaged heart.

"So the Final Jam is coming up and I know you all are very excited," Shane spoke. That caused a calm outburst of cheers and excitement. "So here's some advice," he continued. His eyes directed towards Mitchie and she tried to look away. His words and glare pierced through her with more effect than any other boy could put on her.

"It's not all about your image. None of it means anything unless people see who you really are and your music has to be who you really are. It has to show how you really feel or it doesn't mean anything," Shane proclaimed with his arms wide open. It couldn't have been made more obvious that this advice was directed to her. Tears formed in her eyes and Mitchie pursed her lips, trying to hold back the confused emotions bottled up inside of her.

Suddenly, the group caught on and looked behind them and their eyes laid upon Mitchie's quivering body. She couldn't handle it anymore. She picked herself up off the floor and rushed out the doors. She ran down the pathway to the lake and sped down the dock. She stopped at the end, looking out at the sparkly waters. It looked like the rippling waves were dancing.

Mitchie tore off her socks and shoes and dipped her feet into the cooling lake. Dragonflies flew around her ankles and sometimes one would land on her knee. She stared at it's deep blue coloring and translucent wings. Something so beautiful, so delicate.

Mitchie sat there for a long time, but she couldn't even think of a reason to care against it. A frog jumped into the water, startling Mitchie, almost as if they were warning her of approaching boy. Mitchie quickly grabbed her things and sprinted down the dock and behind a wide fern tree. She peered through the bristly branches and saw him sitting on the bench with his guitar. Her breathe quickened and her heartbeat seemed so loud that she though it'd give her away.

A soft voice traveled through the airwaves and into Mitchie's ears. It came clearer and clearer as the footsteps got louder and louder. She stood as straight as a pin against the tree, trying to conceal herself. The flashy blonde hair and familiar singing gave Mitchie that assurance that it was by all means, Tess.

She continued to listen carefully and watched her near Shane. His dark hair shone in the sunlight and his squinted eyes when he looked up at the girl made Mitchie's heart flutter like the dragonflies. But deep inside was also something like a big green frog that was jumping around her stomach. Jealousy.

Mitchie could now hear Tess clearly and was shocked to hear her own words coming out of Tess' mouth.

This is real, this is me. I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be. Gonna let the light shine on me.

Shane looked at Tess with glistening eyes and a hopeful heart as he continued to listen as Tess sang the words he had been searching for. Mitchie was furiously aware that that was her song, but could do nothing of it. Tess sat next to Shane and innocently smiled at him.

"It was you all this time?" he asked. Tess nodded. Mitchie cringed with Tess' believable lie. Mitchie knew that what she had lied about was a big deal, but for the amount of lies Tess has said, she had nothing to be ashamed off.

Shane smiled back at her with the same smile that Mitchie wished was staring at her. "Why did you wait so long?" he questioned. Tess bit her lip in a quick panic of thought but effectively disguised it as being shy.

"I was scared, Shane. Not of you, but of being the girl you want. The second I set my eyes on you, I wanted to be with you," Tess explained. Mitchie thought with disgust that Tess is an amazing actress. And Shane was also incredibly gullible and just plain stupid.

Mitchie watched with surprise and anger as Tess leaned towards Shane and planted a light kiss on his lips. It was the kind of kiss that would leave him wanting more. Tess was an evil genius. But before he could return the favor, Tess stood up giving him another sickening smile and pranced away like a child who just left the candy shop.

Mitchie's eyes burned and her fists were clenched as she watched Shane look so shocked and pleased. She just wanted to call out to him and let him know that she was the one he was looking for. But it would do nothing. He had lost all trust in Mitchie and she had to find a way to gain him back.

This is going to be a 3 chapter story, from what I've planned right now, but we'll see. REVIEW!