Disclaimer: Twilight and all of its sequels ect are the property of Stephanie Meyer. I don't own it.
A/N: okay so I started writing this story and I don't know, I just didn't like the original first chapter, so I rewrote it. I'd like to say from the start that I haven't read Breaking Dawn yet (In South Africa, it only gets released in September) so anything that is similar is pure coincidence. But by the sounds of it I don't what to read BD, lots of people aren't happy with it. The first chapter has been split into two parts because (according to my sister) it's to long to be a single chapter. Okay, enough of my rambling. Hope you enjoy.
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Chapter 1-Part 1:
"Alice, I don't mind… Yes, I like yellow… No… No, I'm not allergic to fish… Of course, you can put lilies in the bouquets… Yes… Whatever you want… No, it's not a problem… Yes… Fine… No, I'm not inviting him… Who? Is that a band?... Okay… We'll come listen to them… Yes… I'll write that down… Alice, I'm fine with that, it's all up to you, I really don't mind… Okay, I'll see you soon. Bye."
I finally freed my ear from the receiver. "Alice can be so tiring."
Edward chuckled lightly from where he was sitting at the kitchen table, reading a magazine. "You should see her with Rosalie and Emmett's weddings. I told her to tone it down for ours. She's really trying her best not to go overboard. You know, she actually used the second most expensive paper for the invitations." Edward added in a mocking tone.
I allowed a smile to pull at the corners of my mouth. "She's insisting that we go look for shoes in Seattle this afternoon. I wish you'd come." I pleaded. I really didn't want to spend all afternoon being dragged from shop to shop.
I ran my fingers over his shoulders and collarbone as I stood behind him. I saw the faintest trace of a shiver run down his spine. I knew exactly where to touch him to get certain responses.
"If you can along, I might not have to be there all day." I whispered into his ear, hoping my breath would tickle his ear, as his always did mine. "Please?" I murmured even lower.
I could see him stiffen when I used the word. My magic word.
"You don't play fair." Edward mumbled, more to himself. "I'd like to, love, but I'm not allowed to. Alice made me swear that I wouldn't see anything that you would be wearing on the day till then."
"Oh, yeah, I'm sure she did." I mocked, as he pulled me into his lap. I wrapped my arms around his neck. "Oh, and by the way, we've got to go listen to bands for the reception, tomorrow night." Edward and I both groaned.
As dearly as I loved Alice, she was taking this too far and I was on the verge on of a major meltdown or several minor tantrums.
"Well, at least, your mother gets here tomorrow. Then, at least there's someone to keep Alice busy."
I shuddered at the thought. Two of them. My mom would be flying in from Florida tomorrow and would be helping Alice plan the wedding, there was only two weeks left.
For the first time, I looked down at the magazine Edward had been reading. Modern Groom? "You've got to be kidding me." It looked like the exact male counter-part of one of the magazines Alice had thrust upon me, Modern Bride.
"What is this?" I asked, as the smile lit up my face.
"Oh, that's, um, nothing really." Edward tried waving it away with nonchalance. I noticed something flickered over his normally perfectly composed face. He was nervous and I wanted to know why.
I shook open the magazine with one hand and started to flick though the pages but his hand caught mine. His grip, although gentle, was firm.
"I'd rather you not." He smiled and removed the book from my hand.
My eyes narrowed in suspicion. "So what exactly would you rather not let me see?"
He smiled one of those crooked smiles that I loved, "Wouldn't you like to know?" and his lips captured mine. He knew just how to distract me.
When we broke apart, I sighed. "I suppose I should go and indulge your sister and just find a bloody pair of shoes." Why couldn't I just get married in sweats in Vegas?
"It would make her happy and your feet won't be cold." He smiled at me as I slipped out of his lap. I grabbed my jacket that was hanging on the back of the chair and my keys.
I'd take my truck to the Cullen's.
As I stepped into the fine drizzle, I pulled up the hood of my jacket. Edward followed me out the door and locked it. Sloshing across the grass, I looked at my truck. I'd really miss it once we were married. All Edward really wanted was to get rid of it and replace it with a cute, little car with a modified engine.
Edward continued to follow me the truck. As I reached for the passenger door, he cleared his throat.
"I'm going to meet Emmett and Jasper for a little 'hike'."
"Oh, right, sure." I walked round the front of the truck and was about to open the door, when Edward captured my wrist.
"You don't think you can just leave like that?" I smiled as he pressed his lips to mine again. "I love you."
"I love you, too." I said, a little breathlessly.
"I'll see you later, when you get back."
I pulled open the door and slipped into the cab. Once Edward was sure the truck had started, he disappeared.
I drove along the highway towards the Cullen's, dreading the afternoon in Seattle. Maybe I could slip away for a while and find a bookstore. I was always in need of a new book. Maybe I could stock up while I'm there. I should also look at maybe getting Alice a little thank you gift, I suppose.
I was so wrapped up in my thoughts that I didn't notice where I was, until I saw something out of the corner of my eye.
A blur of colour? A dark shadow?
I was stunned for a second and I could feel the truck slowing as my foot released the gas pedal. I looked wildly around me but saw nothing out of the ordinary. The forest continued to line the side of the highway, looking as though it had been undisturbed for a hundred years.
I put my foot back on the gas pedal and gave myself a little shake. I was being paranoid. Again.
I turned into the half-hidden road which lead to the Cullen's. It was probably just a squirrel or something. That sounded about right.
Alice came bounding out of the house as I pulled up. "We're going to have so much fun!" She bounced about with grace I'd wish I had. "It's so exciting, and you'll never guess!"
"I probably won't." I muttered, but Alice continued as if she hadn't heard me.
"Rosalie and Esme said they'd also come!"
My spirits dropped even lower. Rosalie was the only one of the Cullen's that didn't like me. Why would she want to come shopping with me?
As if on cue, Esme and Rosalie came out of the house each carrying a handbag. I smiled as Esme greeted me. Rosalie looked liked slightly smug, as if she know something I didn't.
We all got into the black Mercedes, Esme and Rosalie in the front and Alice and I in the back.
The drive to Seattle was uneventful but Rosalie chatted more than she ever had in front of me. She definitely knew something I didn't.
As we drove into the city, I could see that with was the upper side. The buildings were large and exquisitely decorated. Large, fancy looking apartment blocks rose on either side and I suddenly had a spasm of fear. They were taking me shopping in boutiques!
Alice was positively beaming. "You'll love this place Bella." Esme pulled into the underground parking lot of a mall. I stepped out of the car and Alice immediately hooked my arm into hers as if she was afraid I might bolt.
"This really isn't necessary." I mumbled.
"Nonsense, dear. Your part of our family now." Esme smiled encouragingly. This somehow made me feel worse.
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A/n: okay so that's the new first part of the first chapter. Hoped you liked it. I know this part isn't very exciting but it gets better, I promise.