I do not own PJO or any character, Rick Riordan does. This is my fist story so don't be too harsh. I will add another part if you all like it. PLEASE comment for the sake of my sanity! I love feedback good or bad. But please stay nice!
It was Halloween night, but the atmosphere was different than it has been. The streets seemed to have an orange glow. The clouds were gray and cartoon like because of their puffy style. Annabeth was walking down town in San Francisco to surprise her dad for a Halloween visit. She was excited to see how her step brothers look in their Halloween costumes. She was almost to their apartment when a metallic screeching sound burst out and broke 3 street lights. Annabeth with her great courage followed the sound to 84th street about 2 blocks from her dad's hose.
When she came around the corner she saw green smoke all down the street, and about 6 feet in the air in the middle of it all was a tall girl who looked about 15 with white skin with a green tint to it. She was wearing a black silk dress that made her look like Morticia Adams (The Adams family). Her hair was pure white and her eyes were a deep purple color that took your breath away. As Annabeth got closer, the smell of monster got stronger.
When she was in the girls line of sight the girl roared with shear agony in her voice "this is the anniversary of my sister's death" this made Annabeth anxious to know more but she had no time to ask because right after this the girl said "I have come back to this horrible mortal town every year for the past 4,000 years on this day waiting for the one who killed my sister". Her voice cracked at the end of her sentence and she looked like she was going to cry. "I mean no harm to others". "Just the man who murdered my sister".Annabeth contemplated her next words and with that she asked" Well who might that be"? The girl's eyes turned from deep purple to a harsh red. "Hades"…
Annabeth knew Hades was an evil man but not evil enough to kill an innocent woman. "I can show what happened if you like". Annabeth felt sorry for this girl, she knows what it's like to miss a family member. "Of course, maybe I could help if you showed me how"… She didn't get to finish her sentence. She felt a pain shoot up through her spine and that led to the worst headache ever. She felt her knees buckle as she fell toward the cold asphalt ground. Suddenly she looked around and saw that she was on the shore of the river Styx. She tried to move forward, to run but she couldn't move.
She eventually gave up and observed her surroundings. To her left she saw a girl knelt near the water but not close enough to touch it. She was in a curled up position and Annabeth could faintly hear weeping. The girl stood up and looked right in Annabeth's path but Annabeth could see no change in the girls expression, it was as if she wasn't even there.
The girl started to walk down the shore starring in the water as she went, she was whispering something. As she got closer Annabeth could hear her saying "Mother had not a reason to go, so why"? She soon was right beside Annabeth and Annabeth noticed that she looked very similar to the girl who had sent her there. This girl looked younger though, she had more color to her face than the green girl and also had narrower cheek bones. Annabeth figured she is looking at the green girl's deceased sister and Annabeth is in her death scene.
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