A/N Hello FanFiction fans!!
(well actually, you don't know me yet, but soon, you will be my fans, all
mine *cackles evilly*)
I actually did write a different story, but my friends didn't like it, and
some of my "friends" said it was gay, but, my loyal friend, Rachel
(quicksilver) thought it was pretty good. Also, u gotta read her story,
"Chaos"!! It's in the Harry Potter section, and you seriously must read and
review!!!
I won't keep you much longer, cos I know what it feels like, reading really long and boring a/ns, so yeah
By da way, dis is a HP/TP fanfic, but mostly to TP, also, give me suggestions and review. Wateva - tell me that its bad or good or .you get it
Disclaimer: Everything u have heard before is probably not mine, unless it is.
Chapter 1..Ralon learns his first lesson..at the age of 15 or something
Alanna stared back at the blackboard. She usually found Snape's classes really boring, but seriously, all he did was ramble on and on about wolfsbane and all this really gross stuff. She couldn't wait till it was time to practice archery in the courtyard.
"Go, me!! Go me!!" shrieked Alanna, as she hit the targets, 1 after 1. *freak - in a nice way - no offence intended*
"Well, well, well. I see that we managed to hit the target yet again."
"Oh shut up, Ralon. At least I can hit the target, while you can only stare at others who are better than you, namely me!! Watch and learn, big clumsy oaf!"
*OOOOOh!! That was harsh*
Alanna's friends were grateful for her courage. (they didn't know she was a girl, but I'm just calling her Alanna) It was funny, that every time she replied to Ralon, he would lose in their "argument". They were all thinking, "sucked in Ralon". Besides, he deserved all those snide comments shoved back into his mouth.
A/N: I know wat ur thinking now. U think Alanna's gonna fall in love with Ralon. Well, guess wot!! Ur wrong. Ha ha!!
Ralon glared back at Alanna, then ran to the safety of his gang. Couldn't they see how weak he was??
"Owwww!! That hurt"
Harry Potter had been shoved into the cellar, under the Gryffindor Commonroom. Ever since the portal between his world and Alanna's had been opened, there was nothing but trouble. Oh well, at least Snape was out of the way.
"Harreeeeeeee," yelled Hermione, "I'm going for a swim in the sea, okay?"
"Sure, wateva.."
Ron had just come through the door, just as tired as he was. At least he understood. Suddenly, Harry had a brilliant idea *note the brilliant*. He and Ron could go for a massage!! How nice and soothing.
(wat did ya think.. pretty bad, but hey.not bad for my first fan fic)
"Hey Ron! D'U think we could go for a massage later? I hear that there's a good place in the other world."
"Wait Up!!" yelled Ron, as Harry had already assumed that he would go and had already jumped through the portal.
What lay on the other side, none of them new.....
A/N if you want to now what happens next, review and if you want, I'll post the next chapter, but if everyone says this story's bad well, too bad.
Silverthorn...I got my friends to read the chapters I have written so far, but most of them haven't read TP's stories, so yeah. They said they didn't understand it, so just keep reading and reviewing and tell me what you think.
I won't keep you much longer, cos I know what it feels like, reading really long and boring a/ns, so yeah
By da way, dis is a HP/TP fanfic, but mostly to TP, also, give me suggestions and review. Wateva - tell me that its bad or good or .you get it
Disclaimer: Everything u have heard before is probably not mine, unless it is.
Chapter 1..Ralon learns his first lesson..at the age of 15 or something
Alanna stared back at the blackboard. She usually found Snape's classes really boring, but seriously, all he did was ramble on and on about wolfsbane and all this really gross stuff. She couldn't wait till it was time to practice archery in the courtyard.
"Go, me!! Go me!!" shrieked Alanna, as she hit the targets, 1 after 1. *freak - in a nice way - no offence intended*
"Well, well, well. I see that we managed to hit the target yet again."
"Oh shut up, Ralon. At least I can hit the target, while you can only stare at others who are better than you, namely me!! Watch and learn, big clumsy oaf!"
*OOOOOh!! That was harsh*
Alanna's friends were grateful for her courage. (they didn't know she was a girl, but I'm just calling her Alanna) It was funny, that every time she replied to Ralon, he would lose in their "argument". They were all thinking, "sucked in Ralon". Besides, he deserved all those snide comments shoved back into his mouth.
A/N: I know wat ur thinking now. U think Alanna's gonna fall in love with Ralon. Well, guess wot!! Ur wrong. Ha ha!!
Ralon glared back at Alanna, then ran to the safety of his gang. Couldn't they see how weak he was??
"Owwww!! That hurt"
Harry Potter had been shoved into the cellar, under the Gryffindor Commonroom. Ever since the portal between his world and Alanna's had been opened, there was nothing but trouble. Oh well, at least Snape was out of the way.
"Harreeeeeeee," yelled Hermione, "I'm going for a swim in the sea, okay?"
"Sure, wateva.."
Ron had just come through the door, just as tired as he was. At least he understood. Suddenly, Harry had a brilliant idea *note the brilliant*. He and Ron could go for a massage!! How nice and soothing.
(wat did ya think.. pretty bad, but hey.not bad for my first fan fic)
"Hey Ron! D'U think we could go for a massage later? I hear that there's a good place in the other world."
"Wait Up!!" yelled Ron, as Harry had already assumed that he would go and had already jumped through the portal.
What lay on the other side, none of them new.....
A/N if you want to now what happens next, review and if you want, I'll post the next chapter, but if everyone says this story's bad well, too bad.
Silverthorn...I got my friends to read the chapters I have written so far, but most of them haven't read TP's stories, so yeah. They said they didn't understand it, so just keep reading and reviewing and tell me what you think.