Yo, what's up? I'm PikachuZahir4997, and this is my first fan fiction. I would like to thank my beta reader Chris Nest(go check out his story's there very cool)and his awesome friend Daxter for being my beta and helping on my stories. Hopefully this story will be noticed by someone and I'll be able to have motivation to write more chapters. If you are reading this story I thank you for you time.

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. Maybe I can be able to bride Kishimoto into making me own the Naruto series and I can get money and stuff.

"Dattebayo!" - Human Talking

'Ramen~' - Human Thinking

"Kit." - Biju, Summon, and/or Demon Talking

"Kage Bunshin No Justu!" - Jutsu Calling

"Stupid Kid." - Biju, Summon, and/or Demon Talking

EDITED: Had to fix some grammar mistakes.


It was a sunny autumn day in Konohagaukure no Sato, The Village Hidden In The Leaves. A 12-year old blonde boy that is a bit on the short side, wakes up a from his slumber in his little apartment. Our hero here is Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze, a boy with sun-kissed blonde hair, a little chubby face, 4'9 in height, whisker marks on his face, and Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi no Yoko, Kurama. Our hero blinks the sleep out of his eyes and looks around his little room.

"Woah...it worked..."

Naruto breaks out into his trademark foxy grin. "KURUMA IT WORKED!" Naruto then falls back over in his bed again, knocked out by the Kyuubi into his mindscape...

Chapter 1 of Coming In Like A Uzumai, Dattebayo!

Back In The Past, Kuruma It Worked!

Naruto then wakes up into a sewer-like space with giant red bars in front of him with a seal in the middle. A giant red-orange fox appears behind the cage. "Nice job kit, I knew you would be able to handle it." Kuruma the Kyuubi no Yolo smiles down at the blonde boy. Naruto smiles back up at the demon fox. "Yea, but I wouldn't have been able to do it without you and the other biju." Kuruma nods his head. "True kit, very true, now back to the topic at hand, you do remember why where here, right?" Naruto stares blankly at the Kuruma, droll starting to come out of his mouth. Kuruma facepalms with one of his giant tails. 'Are you kidd- gah I shouldn't be surprised, even after all these years he's still a loud mouthed idiot.'

The giant fox sighed.."Forget it kit I'll explain again at a later time, you know what day it is though, right?" Naruto puts his hand on his chin and puts on a thinking face. "Oh yeah!" Naruto feels his forehead, where his headband should be.

"Its gradation day!"

(1 hour later at Konoha Ninja Academy)

After a hour of getting ready and finally getting out of his apartment, Naruto literary dashes through the village, a mer orange and black blur to the untrained eye. Wearing a orange jacket, a black t-shirt, orange pants, blue shinobi sandals and his goggles around his neck. Naruto bursts through the front door of the Academy. Naruto makes his way down a large hallway full of classrooms and bursts through Iruka's classroom, literally gasping for air. The entire class goes silent.

"NARUTO!"

Naruto freezes and nervously looks at Iruka Umino, his(well in Naruto's opinion)adopted older brother. "NARUTO UZUMAKI! DO YOU HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY TO THE CLASS FOR COMING THROUGH THE DOOR LIKE A ONE OF HOKAGE-SAMA'S MONKEYS AND BEING ONE HOUR LATE FOR CLASS!?" Naruto quickly thinks over a excuse to use before he has to feel Iruka's wrath.

"Uh...sorry Iruka-sensei I had some things I had to do this morning, hehehe" Naruto rubs his hand behind his Ihead sheepishly.

"And by 'things' you mean getting used to the cold water in your shower and finding you cereal."

'Shut up you stupid fox!'

Iruka tilts his head in confusion to why Naruto suddenly has a face of annoyance on his face. Iruka shakes his head. 'I'll deal with Naruto later, it's time for the class to get back in order.' Iruka sighs. "Whatever Naruto just sit in your seat and we'll get gradation started."

The blonde boy smiles and takes a sit beside of Ino. Ino takes a glance at Naruto in amusement. 'Haha the baka got in trouble again, serves him right for being stupid.' Then she thinks in disgust. 'Ew, gross why those the baka got to sit next to me and forehead gets to sit next to Sasuke...ITS NOT FAIR!'

Mizuki soon walks into the room and for a moment Naruto glares at him. 'Mizuki...' In the back of Naruto's mind, Kuruma growls darkly 'This human...the one who made the kit feel like a monster on 'that day' hopefully he will perish in the hands of Naruto again.' The Kyuubi then smirks darkly.

Iruka claps his hands together, getting the classes attention. "Alright kiddies, time for the graduation, first up is Ar-" Naruto tunes out Iruka waiting for his and takes a look around the class. Sasuke looking out the window, brooding. Naruto silently glares at him at him. He won't be leaving the village on his watch. Then he takes a look at Sakura and quickly looks away.

'Still alive...don't need to go up in tears now.'

While thinking up the pa-..er I mean future. Naruto fails to notice Iruka calling him.

"UZUMAKI NARUTO, GET YOUR ASS DOWN HERE!"

Naruto falls off his chair and runs down the steps to get to the bottom, tripping and fall I flat on his face at the bottom. While the entire class laughs at the blonde man turned preteen, Iruka facepalms himself while Mizuki chuckles a little. "Naruto get up please so we can get this over with." Naruto scrambles to his feet and stands straight up.

"Alright first thing first, Henge into Hokage-sama."

"Hokage-jiji, got it!" Naruto soon performs the necessary hand seals and in a poof of smoke, Naruto into a exact replica of the Hokage. Iruka nods his head.

"Alright now Kawarimi."

"Kawarimi, got it!" Naruto forms the seals, and in a poor of smoke, he replaced himself with a chair at the edge of the room and reappears back in front of Iruka and Mizuki.

"Alright...now do the Bunshin.

Naruto blinks in confusion. "Uh...did you say Bunshin?" Naruto starts to sweat nervously.

"Yes, do the Bunshin no Justu, Naruto!"

Naruto puts his head down in shame.

"...Shit."


*Gasp* A cliffhanger! *Slams open my closet door and points at a hanger* ...Oops, that's a cloths hanger...Anyway that was the first chapter of Coming In Like A Uzumaki! This is Zahir and Sparky sighing out!

"Raichu Raichu!"

I would like to thank Chris Nest for being my Beta Reader.

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