(Sarah's Note Hi precious reader I am sacrificing my brain cells for you anything in Italics is my commentary enjoy. I don't own harry potter and I don't own My immortal )

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) great a Goth person who can't spell what a great combination 2 my gf (ew not in that way) and a homophobe raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story obviously not the spelling and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life reading this story makes me depressed what it must do to you to write it u rok 2! MCR ROX!

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way because your parents just knew they were going to raise an idiotic goffik and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. INCEST ALERT I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. Great exactly what harry potter needed vampires I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year Yay that means that this is her last year screwing up our lives (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) no shit sherlock and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic that's where I buy my harry potter and superman stuff and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. Blah Blah basically what a prostitute would wear but black I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining slushing my favorite weather so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. Because you would sparkle A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. classy

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy! Our first original character

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly. Draco shy what

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. Wait you have friends

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! No its not ok you need help