Sora:First story and accept criticism. I do not own Naruto! Seriously tell me what I do wrong I need to know this.
A young girl about 4 with black hair was running through the forest trying to escape the place she has been kept in all her life. She didn't want to think of the dark cages and the needles. All she knew is that she never wanted to go back. The young girl opened her eyes they were green and blue with a swirl in them they flickered and turned to a dark brown color.
A young girl with brown hair and blue eyes was lying in the forest surrounded by foxes. This girl also looked to be 4. The same time the girl with black hair eyes flickered the green and blue hers flickered a gold and silver with swirls. These two girls didn't know it but this was just the start of they're adventures.
Kitsua heard the young foxes stir around her so she opened her eyes to see what's going on. One of the kits started whining and was pulling on her baggy shorts. The young girl complied and let the young kit lead her to where ever. The kit pulled her through some bushes where she heard a whimpering. Kitsua ran farther into the bushes and saw a girl her age lying on the ground. Kitsua tried to get close but a young weasel popped out from underneath the girl and started baring it fangs. Kitsua quietly kneeled down and started talking to the weasel. "It's okay little one I'm just trying to help her." The young weasel complied and let Kitsua help the young girl. Kitsua started wrapping her wounds. After that she built a fire and decided to go get some fish.
FF
The young girl with black hair woke up she looked around to see she was next to a fire with her wounds wrapped. She was happy to see she was not in that cold damp cage anymore. She quickly turned her head when she heard the bushes move. She got prepared to fight when a young girl about her age came out of the bushes. "Oh you're awake." The brunette girl said. "I thought you would never wake up." She giggled. The girl placed the fish down and came over to the girl. "My name is Kitsua what's yours?" she asked. "I – I don't have a name." the raven haired girl said shyly. "Well this just won't do I guess I'll have to name you myself." Kitsua said and put her hand up to her chin to think. "I got it I'll call you Keiko ok." She told her. Keiko nodded yes. "Good I have a feeling we are going to be great friends even sisters." Kitsua said proudly.
What Kitsua said was true the girls became close since they were 4. They decided to learn how to fight in case they get into certain situations. So they would go into villages to look at scrolls. They would find different teachers to teach them how to wield weapons. They learned chakra control on their own and was working on their nature manipulation. Through the years they learned more about each other. Keiko told Kitsua about the experiments they did on her, and Kitsua told her why she was alone. They became as close as sisters. They traveled around and only stayed in a village for a short time. They didn't know when Keiko's birthday is so they just celebrated on the same day. They became as close as sisters they even did a blood bond. When they turned 8 something happened that would change they're lives.
"Kit! Kit! You won't believe what I found." Yelled an overly joyous Keiko. She came running over to her sister with her pet weasel Tachi in her arms. He black hair reached down to her knees and was put in a tight braid. She had black shorts on and a black shirt with a fox on the back. She didn't look like it but she was smart Kitsua liked to call her a crazy genius because that's what she is. But she didn't let that get to her she liked being called that foxes are suppose to be tricky. "What did you find?" A girl with brown hair to her shoulders and blue eyes. She had on a black shirt with an orange hood and black cargo pants. He pet fox Ryuu was in her hood sleeping. She didn't look like it but she was strong and had a great deal of knowledge of the human body she could knock you out just by poking you with her finger. Both girls had a weapon strapped on them somewhere. Keiko had a katana strapped to her back, while Kitsua had a small fan with blades on the end.
"There is this waterfall with a cave behind it. It's really cool come I'll show you." Keiko said happily as she led her sister to the cave. As they reached the waterfall they stopped to look at its beauty. The water falls gently into a small lake, water lilies are drifting everywhere, and the water was so clear blue you could see yourself in it."Come on Kit through here." The hyper girl said. As they entered the cave Kitsua only had one word to say. "Wow Kei wow." There were markings on the wall but she couldn't read them. At the same time both of the girls touched the words on the wall. There was a bright flash and everything went white. "Kit kit where are you." Keiko screamed. "Right here Kei." Kitsua said and grabbed her sister's hand. They couldn't see anything it was so blinding white they had to close their eyes. Keiko
started to freak out she hated bright light it always reminded her of the experiments that would happen to her when she was little. Kitsua was freaking out feeling for a way out since she couldn't see.
Then both of the girls stop because they could hear a voice. "My dear Kit's it is time for you to unleash your heritage." Said a loud but gentle voice. Both girls opened they're eye's at the same time finding that they were able to see. "What is going on?" Kitsua commented then turned to look at her sister. She was shocked her sister looked different there were red streaks in her hair, and her eyes where different colors. The left is green and the right eye was blue, they both had swirls in them. When Keiko looked at her sister she gasped. Kitsua had blue streaks in her hair and her eye's where also a different color. Her left eye was silver while the other was gold. Keiko took a deep breath before asking a question. "What is happening?" They then heard a gentle laugh. "You my children are my descendents." Said the voice. "Can you say that again it sounded like you said we were your descendents?" Kitsua said "It is true. I have sent you both to earth to protect someone special." The caring voice said. "This person can decide the fate of the lands we can't let them get into the wrong hands." Kitsua looked ready to explode. "What are we suppose to do we're only 8."
"Don't worry kit I have sent someone to train you. His is skilled and can teach more than what you already know. He will be here the next full moon." The voice told them. "The next full moon is in 2 days."Keiko proclaimed. "If I may ask what is your name." Keiko inquired "I have many name but for now you may call me Tenshi." The voice said. "Well then Tenshi it is."Kitsua said "Good then be swift because many trials lie ahead." Tenshi said. Then there was a flash and the girls woke up in the cave. That wasn't the last they heard from Tenshi.