I absolutely love this movie and I have always loved Haku so this story is the perfect way to let all my fantasies out. Enjoy!

Chapter 1

The long car ride was seriously getting on my nerves. We just had to move didn't we? We couldn't have stayed in our old town? I missed my friends and my old school.

"Look there's your new school." My mom said. I glanced over and rolled my eyes as Chihiro stuck her tongue out at it. Chihiro is my twin sister, we're identical twins but different in every other way. My hair is longer and while she always has hers up mine is always down. I also like dark colors while Chihiro likes bright colors.

Other than those details our personalities are polar opposites. I like to sit down and listen to music or read but Chihiro likes to draw and paint. Not only that but I like to explore and go on adventures while Chihiro likes to cling and shout.

"Satoshi." Chihiro said.

"Chihiro." I said without looking up from my book.

"You'll stay with me during the first couple day's right?" She said in a small voice that sounded like she was about to cry.

I looked her straight in the eye and said. "Yes I will." She smiled and I looked at her flowers. "You better hope we get there soon because you're flowers look bad." She started to complain to mom and I picked up my own bouquet. Instead of getting me real flowers that would shrivel up and die my friends got me metal flowers that would live forever.

We stopped on a small dirt road. Our parents started arguing and Chihiro and I looked out the window. "What are those small stone houses?" I asked.

"They're shrines." Mom said. "Some people say little spirits live there."

I nodded and kept looking at them. For some reason spirits always fascinated me and to see shrines right in front of me was exciting.

The car started racing down the bumpy road. I accidently ripped out the page in my book where I wrote my name. Cursing quietly I stuffed it in my pocket. I would tape it back in when we got to the house.

The car suddenly stopped and I flew into the back of dad's seat face first. Chihiro giggled while I looked at where we stopped. There was a statue that looked like a frog and a dark tunnel. I opened my door and stepped out. I couldn't stop staring at the tunnel.

We were all standing in front of it when Chihiro voiced my thoughts. "The wind's pulling us in." I nodded silently. This place was taking my breath away.

We started walking through the tunnel and we eventually came to a square room. There was an archway like the one we came through on one side and there were three tunnels where we just came from. There was also a fountain with a stain glass window. It had a certain vibe that pulled me in.

We walked in and mom and dad were looking around. They started to walk through the archway on the other side of the room.

Chihiro started to panic then. "I thought we were just going to take a look." I started to follow them and Chihiro grabbed my arm. "Satoshi, we shouldn't be here."

Before I could say anything the wind started blowing roughly and the building started moaning. I grabbed Chihiro's arm and started to pull her through. "I don't think we have much of a choice here Chihiro."

She nodded and clung to me as we walked. Normally I hated it when she clung to me but right now I needed someone to hold onto me. I felt like we just drifted out of our world.

We walked across a grassy field and a line of rocks. Dad said they were planning to put a river here. We were crossing it when dad spoke up. "Do you smell that?" He asked. "Maybe this place isn't abandoned after all."

We were having trouble walking over the stones but mom and dad kept walking. "Hey Satoshi, could you put my card in your pocket? I don't want to lose it." I grabbed it and stuffed it with the page from my book.

The stone steps just kept going on and on. There were restaurants going along the length of both sides of the steps. "Why are there so many restraints?" I asked. Mom and dad weren't listening; they were too busy following their noses.

Once they found the food they started stuffing their faces. "I'm going to walk around." I told Chihiro, and then I frowned. "Don't eat anything." She nodded and I knew she felt the bad vibe I felt.

I walked up the rest of the steps when I saw it. It was a huge red building with a green roof. There was gold on it and a factory smoke tower. "A bathhouse." I said when I recognized it.

I heard the train so I looked over the railing to see it going under the train. I ran across to see the train going across the water. That was when I saw him. He looked taller than me with dark green hair and light green eyes. He was wearing a white tunic with blue underneath it.

"What are you doing here?" he asked. "You shouldn't be here." He looked back to see the lanterns lighting. "You have to go. Get out of here. Now. Get across the river."

I started running down the steps but I couldn't find Chihiro. "Guys." I shouted. I started to panic and I kept shouting. I ran down to the frog statue we passed earlier and I ran into a river. "What?" I gasped before running back. "This can't be happening."

There was a boat coming across from a town that wasn't there before. That's when I noticed something scary. I was see through.

So, what do you think? I know the script was a little different but that's what I wrote. Let me know if you have any ideas what Satoshi's slave name should be. Also in the movie the girl's name is Lin but on this website it says Rin, what's her name? Please review with your thoughts!