Hey-o people! This is my first fanfict so bare with me now. Also, I encourage constructive criticism. So tell me what you think.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT NOR EVER WILL OWN MAXIMUM RIDE AND ANYTHING IN THEM, FOR I AM NOT A GENIUS MAN! Thank you.
Chapter One: How I Got Kicked Out of the Flock
~Four years eariler~
MAX'S P.O.V.
As I flew back to our most recent hideout, I sensed something was wrong, so being me I flew faster. When I arrived, I started to call the others, but stopped when I realized they were already here.
"Guys..." I started, but was cut short when Iggy stepped forward.
"Max, we've been talking and we want you out now," Iggy stated.
I was in shock. How could they do this to me?! Why now? "What...why...?" I said dumbly, still trying to comprehend what they were telling me.
Then, my baby, my Angel, started talking. "Max, you know we love you, but you need to leave. We don't want to fight any more and it's your mission. We're done. Pack what you have and go," she told me.
I choked back the sob that was threatening to escape and found the courage to ask, "Is this what you want? All of you?" Ever so slowly, they all nodded, except for Fang who looked at me and whispered, "We are over."
I couldn't take it anymore. I ran and jumped off the cliff spreading my wings. I didn't dare cry until I was 25 miles away. There I pulled my soul out until there was nothing left and I fell into a deep slumber. I don't know how long it was before I awoke, but when I did I felt like I was going to die.
~Present~
I was on my own for a little bit before I found my new flock. One by one we became a closer family. Now, four years later, I'm 19 and stronger than ever with my new and improved flock. Besides, who needs the old ones anyway?
So, what ya think? Please review and tell me if I should continue with the story, and names and powers for the new flock. I'll try to have a new chapter up in a couple of days. Until next time, goodbye my fellow peeps.
