this Is my first fan fiction. Please review. And is some one alredy thought of this Idea Im sorry
Tigerclaws P.O.V
I
was running to camp, Brokenstar's rouges hot on my trail. This was my
chance to make Thunderclan great once more. I ran right into the camp
and turned on the rouges, they scattered.
There were only the
kittypet Fireheart and a few other cats to defend the clan against
Brokenstar's attack. I knew I would have to hurry, I saw Cloudpaw
slip through the camp entranse, most likely to fetch the patrols.
Russetfur had just vaulted onto Fireheart when I ran into Bluestar's
den.
"Remember me to Starclan Bluestar." I
snarled.
"Tigerclaw! What is the meaning of this, I am your
leader, or have you forgotten?" She challenged.
"Not
much longer." I growled. I jumped on her and put an end to her
just as Fireheart rushed in.
"No!" He yowled, then
turned on me, anger burning in his eyes.
Quickly, I ran out of the
den, joining in the fight with the newly returned patrols. The
fighting broke up as the rouges fled.
The injured Thunderclan cats
gathered around the Highrock as I jumped up. The cats whispered among
themselves, curious why I was up on the Hightrock instead of
Bluestar. Several faces turned to anguish as the realization hit
them...