Heya! 1st time writin a Naruto story so tips wud be helpful but I hope u like this 1st chapter!
Disclaimer: Don't own Naruto even though I wish I did. All I own are any OCs that pop up in this story.
" weird" – talking
'weird' – thinking
"weird" – Kyuubi/boss summons talking
'weird' – Kyuubii/boss summons thinking
The bright moon shone down on a secluded training ground, surrounded by tall trees, as the stars watched the petite form of a sixteen year old girl, known as Hinata Hyuuga, beat the living hell out of a wooden stump.
Beads of sweat ran down her face, merging with the tear streaming from her eyes as she took out her frustrations on the solid block of wood infront of her.
She had just had another confrontation with her father, the stuck up prick of a man known as Hiashi Hyuuga, about a recent mission she and the rest of Team 8 had completed.
The mission was successful but apparently, according to her father, it wasn't enough even though the mission went up from a B Rank to an A Rank mission when the team was ambushed by a large group of C – B Rank missing nins that had been terrorizing the area for around seven months. They managed to defeat the gang and escape with only cuts, bruises, a few broken bones and chakra depletion. Despite this little . . . okay BIG upset the mission was completed in good time.
Hiashi didn't see it this way and, instead, berated her, a fairly new chuunin, for not being able to sense a group of well trained high chuunins – high jounins and thus not being able to fully protect her team from harm 'like true Hyuuga should'!
Hinata had already been out here for four hours and, ideally, should have stopped at least an hour ago so that she could rest and not put stress on her recent wounds but, unfortunately, her distress over the recent ordeal seemed to be overriding her common sense as well as her better judgement.
Thanks to this, the exhausted girl collapsed and lost consciousness half an hour later.
The stars and moon weren't the only ones watching Hinata though as a tall, shadowed figure gently gathered her into his arms before jumping away into the tree tops.
Hinata groaned as she opened her eyes.
'Where am I?' she thought groggily.
She sat up slowly, wincing in pain at her sore muscles and limbs.
She was sat in a large king sized four poster bed with a soft, thick midnight blue comforter. The room she was in quite large as well, with the walls being the same colour of midnight blue as the bed she was in. The room was also well furnished with two large, glass French doors leading to a large balcony with a magnificent view of what looked like hills with a forest in the background.
Suddenly the huge, heavy, oak doors leading to the room she was in creaked as they open a bit.
Hinata's breath quickens as and her heart starts to beat wildly in fear and anticipation as to who or what might walk through those doors.
"Hinata-chan? Are you awake yet?"
Hinata freezes at the familiar voice as a blush slowly adorned her cheeks.
'Naruto-kun?! It can't be, his voice isn't usually that deep. . .'
A head of long-ish, spiky, blond hair pops through the door, as sapphire blue eyes scan the room quickly before locking onto the shocked form of Hinata, still sitting in the bed, covered by the warm comforter.
Hinata felt more blood rush to her face but was way too shocked to faint like usual.
The boy . . . no, man, in front of her was definitely Naruto as you would never be able to mistake his sapphire blue eyes, unique Cheshire grin and whisker like marks on his cheeks, but he was different and that's saying something seeing as the last time she saw him was only a week ago!
For one thing, he was at least four inches taller and now stood at around 6ft4"!!
As he walked closer to the bed Hinata was sitting in, she also noticed that he looked a hell of a lot like the 4thHokage, especially with his hair being longer (she wasn't exactly sure how it could grow that much in a week but oh well) and in almost the same style as well.
He wasn't even wearing his usual orange jumpsuit but baggy black trousers with two deep orange stripes down each leg and a black vest which showed off his toned muscles and six pack.
'. . . Wow '
This seemed to be the last straw for Hinata as her brain just couldn't seem to handle the image in front of her.
The last thing she saw was the startled face of this new, improved and, more importantly, HOT Naruto running towards her . . . and then she promptly fainted.
About an hour later Hinata slowly regained consciousness and then tried to sit up only to find that something, or rather someone, was holding her back. She also happened to notice that her pillow was quite warm and happened to have a heartbeat.
Hinata hesitantly tilted her head upwards and almost chocked on her tongue in surprise!!
Just above her head was the sleeping face of the person she had admired since she was a little girl!
Naruto had joined her in the bed and was cradling her against her chest.
'He was probably waiting for me to wake up and just accidently fell asleep' Hinata rationalised as she tried to calm her hammering heart.
Hinata managed to worm her way out of Naruto's grip so that she could sit up next to him.
'Why does he look so different from a week ago . . . not that that's a bad thing . . . he looks even hotter than he did before!' she mused while staring at his face.
Slowly her lavender tinted eyes travelled up from his face and locked onto the hair that helped to look so much like the Yondaime it was almost untrue!
Hinata raised her hand to touch the soft spikes before hesitating.
'What if he wakes up?!'
These thoughts were forgotten when her fingers finally reached those soft, blond locks and she was soon running her fingers through his hair and only realized when Naruto gave a soft moa of apparent satisfaction.
"Eeep!" Hinata quickly went to snatch her hand back when a larger, stronger and rougher hand gripped her small, delicate wrist.
Hinata nervously looked down only to be captivated by the blue depths of his eyes as he kept his unwavering yet, somehow, vulnerable gaze on her. Hinata immediately turned bright red with embarrassment and looked away from him.
"I-I'm s-sorry. I r-r-really s-shouldn't have b-been doing t-t-that. N-Naruto-kun I-"
Naruto gently turned her face towards him and gave her a gentle smile.
"Don't appologize Hinata-chan, it was . . . nice"
They sat in awkward silence for a while before Naruto finally spoke;
"Soooo, Hinata-chan, what got you so worked up last night that you worked yourself into exhaustion?"
Hinata looked down into her lap sadly as tears started to form in her gentle eyes as she remembered her confrontation with her father. Soon the tears started to stream down her face, like the night before, and she broke down in sobs.
Naruto's eyes held great concern as he looked at her sadly before silently bringing her into his arms, on his lap, and rocking backwards and forwards as he tried to comfort the girl.
After a while the sobs were reduced to hiccups and a few silent tears. Still holding her close to his chest, Naruto gently whispered into her ear;
"Hey, what's the matter Hinata-chan? Was it your father again?"
Hinata nodded but didn't look up. Naruto frowned at her answer.
'We have to do something, Kit, this cannot be allowed to carry on'
'I know Kyuu-niisan, I know'
"Hmmm, I know what you need Hinata-chan!" grinned Naruto, standing the both of them up but keeping a gentle hold on her hand before leading her out of the room.
Hinata looked around in complete amazement. It would seem that they were on the third floor of what looked like a mansion! The colour of the walls was a light creamy-white, making the hallways seem even bigger than they already were!
After a few turns, Naruto led Hinata through a door into what looked like a spa rather than a bathroom!]Naruto went over to a large Jacuzzi and turned the taps on full before turning back to a confused Hinata and grinning.
"I'll be back in a minute with a spare pair of trousers and a t-shirt for you to change into after you've finished relaxing in the Jacuzzi" he said, pointing to said object, " Just leave your clothes outside the door so I can wash them."
And with that he left the room.
Hinata sat down on one of the cushioned stools and looked around. The room was tiled with large beige stone tiles and the roof was painted a crisp white in colour.
The floor was tiled in the same type of tiles as the ones on the walls and in the middle of the room the big Jacuzzi, that was quickly filling up with hot water, to the left there were some showers, to the right there seemed to be dedicated to the art of massage and in each corner of the room was a small potted palm tree in a simple yet elegant grey, stone pot.
Hinata was distracted from her thoughts when Naruto came through the door with a bundle of clothes and a large fluffy towel and put them down on another stool.
"When you're done, a little blue and white fox and a little yellow toad will be waiting for you and will lead you to me downstairs. Oh, and don't be surprised as these two love to talk but we'll talk more and undoubtedly get onto the subject of, err, my . . . apparent change and all, sooo, uh, yea. See ya when you're finished Hinata-chan!" and he left through the door.
By now the Jacuzzi was done filling up so Hinata turned the taps off, stripped herself of her clothes, remembering to leave them outside the door, and slowly sank into the Jacuzzi, letting all her worries fall off her as she relax.
Hinata looked at some of the bottles that lined the Jacuzzi before choosing a purple one and lathering her hair with it.
'I'm so confused. Naruto-kun looks so different, not that I'm complaining' a blush rose to her cheeks ' I'm in a place that is sooo big I'm sure it's some sort of clan estate, but I'm sure I've never seen or been here before! And then he tells me about a blue and white fox? I knew he could summon toads but now it sounds like he can summon foxes as well!"
Hinata gently submerged herself in the soothing hot water, getting the soap off from her hair, before resurfacing and continuing to relax for another half an hour.
After that, she got out and wrapped herself in the overly large fluffy orange towel that Naruto left for her.
It really was massive, but then again when you think about it, it was Naruto's who just so happened to be 6ft4 while she was only 5ft4, so it was understandable she guessed.
The towel was so soft and the scent was all Naruto. Hinata breathed in the comforting scent and sat down still wrapped up in the towel. She buried her face in the soft material and just stayed like that for a couple of minutes before getting up and pulling on her underwear and then the pair of trousers and the t-shirt that she was given to her. She looked at herself in the full length mirror that was on the wall beside her.
The white t-shirt with an orange spiral on it came down to just above her knees and the trousers were so long that to roll the legs up several times and even then they were still baggy on her small frame.
"It will have to do" she sighed, picked up the towel and opened the door.
"Hey, are you Miss Hinata?"
Hinata looked around but couldn't see anyone.
"Hey, we're down here Miss!"
Hinata looked down and there, looking at her, was a little fluffy sky blue and white fox and a small sunflower yellow toad wearing and equally small brown leather waistcoat.
"Oh, err, h-hello f-fox-san, t-t-toad-san."
The fox smiled "Please Miss Hinata, my name is Nami."
"And I'm Gamaken!" added the toad, grinning.
Hinata smiled at them.
"Oh yeah, niisan told us to take you to him when you were finished!" exclaimed Gamaken, hitting his hand with his fist, "C'mon, follow me!"
Nami hit him with her tail.
"What he means to say, Miss Hinata, is follow US." She said, glaring at the toad next to who was chuckling sheepishly.
Nami and Gamaken led Hinata down four flights of stairs, each floor showing off wealth and homeliness at the same time.
Finally they made it to the bottom and into what looked liked the hallway/reception area. To their right was a huge oak front door with intricate carvings around the stained glass window which had a picture of the Kyuubi in it.
Hinata was pulled out of her thoughts by her two small companions tugging on her oversized trouser leg.
"Come on Miss Hinata, Niisan's this way." said Gamaken, hopping towards an open door.
The three of them walked through the door and into a huge living area. There was a huge flat screen TV on one of the walls and five large couches all angled towards the TV with one being right opposite from it.
There was also the sound of deep breathing coming from said piece of furniture.
Nami sighed and shook her furry head, "Niisan really needs to get a proper bed time." She then turned to Hinata "This is where we have to leave you I'm afraid as I believe that Niisan said he wanted some time alone with you but don't worry because you'll definitely be seeing us and the rest of our fellow summons soon!"
Nami and Gamaken grinned at her.
"See Ya Later!!" they both exclaimed before. . .err. . .poofing away, for lack of better words.
Hinata stared at the spot where the two apparent summons once were before turning and nervously walking towards where her crush was splayed out with a blanket layed rather haphazardly upon his body as one of his arms hung off for apparent comfort.
Hinata bent down to where his head was resting on a pillow and gently brushed his bangs away from his eyes and then gently traced his jaw line.
"He's grown up so much and now he looks even more like an adult, like a man" she murmured to herself quietly before gently shaking his shoulder, "N-Naruto-kun, it's t-t-time to w-wake up n-now"
Naruto frowned slightly and leaned further into his pillow while unconsciously bringing up the arm that he had hanging of the couch around Hinata's waist and pulled her towards him before rolling over, with her in his arms, so that she was sandwiched between him and the back of the couch.
Meanwhile, Hinata's face was a whole new shade of red and she thought that she was about to have a heart attack!
'Ohmygodohmygodohmygod!! Okay Hinata, just calm down, it's all good, just ignore the fact that you're sandwiched between your crush and a flippin couch with only a few bits of material to separate you!'
Hinata tried to get her breathing under control before squeaking out his name in an attempt to wake him up but Naruto just buried his face into the crook of her neck and held her tighter to his body.
It was safe to say that Hinata lost consciousness after that.
"Kit, hey Kit, wake up already!"
'Hmm? What is it Kyuu-niisan?'
Kyuubi chuckled "Just thought you might want to wake up seeing as I assume you want ti spend some time with your mate after you tell her everything."
By this time Naruto had opened his eyes and had taken note of the girl sleeping in his arms with one slender arm resting on his stomach while her head rested on his chest.
'True. . .hold up, wait! She's not my mate!!'
Kyuubi smirked "But you want her to be don't you?"
'. . . .maybe'
Well that's the 1st chapter done so tell me wat u think. Good, bad, awful? Just don't forget to review!
Ja ne!
Sentarstage