Inuyasha! Follow your Heart!
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~ Kagome-shikon-chan
"I will never destroy her. AND YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!" Once again, Inuyasha leaped at Shesshomaru, attemting to attack with the Teutsaiga. "Damn it! Why won't this thing transform?!?!" Despite his desprate efforts, the teutsaiga would not transform into any matter of a desent weapon.
"Inuyasha. It is too late. If you are not helping the human, it will not transform. Since the Shikon no Toma is inside Kagome, she is no longer full human. She has passed into the demon world, and there is nothing you can do to stop it."
"CURSE YOU!!!!!" With all the strength he had left, he darted straight for Shosshomaru. Yet another weak attempt.
"My creation! Attack this worthless fool!" Shesshomaru turned to Kagome, only she had changed. Changed for the worst.
Inuyasha took one look at her, and his heart swelled with anger and confusion.
Kagome had changed almost beyond recognition. She had become almost eight feet tall, her eyes glowed a bright gold, her once beautiful black hair was matted and faded, and her teeth had become fangs.
"Ka-Ka-Kagome?!?!?" Inuyasha was enraged. "KAGOME!!!!! What has this bastard done to you?!? Ka-kagome..."
Kagome looked at him, but instead of the usual look of warmth and comfort, she looked empty. Like there was nothing inside of her heart or her soal.
"Kagome? can you hear me?! Are you in there??!!?!" Inuyasha cried out despratly. He knew that he could not attack her. But maybe, if he brought back her memories of him, and of warm times of smiles and laughter, he could get her out of it.
"Kagome. Remember that night, when I lost my powers as a demon? The night that the spider demons attacked? Well, when i was poisoned, you took care of me! You let me lie in your lap! YOU SHED TEARS FOR ME! Please, Kagome, don't leave me! Not like this! I cannot attack you! Come back to me Kagome!"
Kagome looked as if she did not hear a word that he had just said. She kept moving forward, toward Inuyasha.
"DAMN! IT DIDN'T WORK!"
"Give it up, Inuyasha. Nothing will work. She is my demon now, and I have taken her sole. Word has reached my ears about the mighty preistess inside Kagome, and I want that power. I need that power. So I took her sole. And at the same time, I created a monster. A monster, that finally, my own brother, will not be able to destroy. How convenient."
--------------------------- TO BE CONTINUED.... --------------------------- Well, please post reviews! It's nice knowing what people think of one's work. :) Thank you!
PS. should i continue with the series? or just stop? Its up to you
"I will never destroy her. AND YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!" Once again, Inuyasha leaped at Shesshomaru, attemting to attack with the Teutsaiga. "Damn it! Why won't this thing transform?!?!" Despite his desprate efforts, the teutsaiga would not transform into any matter of a desent weapon.
"Inuyasha. It is too late. If you are not helping the human, it will not transform. Since the Shikon no Toma is inside Kagome, she is no longer full human. She has passed into the demon world, and there is nothing you can do to stop it."
"CURSE YOU!!!!!" With all the strength he had left, he darted straight for Shosshomaru. Yet another weak attempt.
"My creation! Attack this worthless fool!" Shesshomaru turned to Kagome, only she had changed. Changed for the worst.
Inuyasha took one look at her, and his heart swelled with anger and confusion.
Kagome had changed almost beyond recognition. She had become almost eight feet tall, her eyes glowed a bright gold, her once beautiful black hair was matted and faded, and her teeth had become fangs.
"Ka-Ka-Kagome?!?!?" Inuyasha was enraged. "KAGOME!!!!! What has this bastard done to you?!? Ka-kagome..."
Kagome looked at him, but instead of the usual look of warmth and comfort, she looked empty. Like there was nothing inside of her heart or her soal.
"Kagome? can you hear me?! Are you in there??!!?!" Inuyasha cried out despratly. He knew that he could not attack her. But maybe, if he brought back her memories of him, and of warm times of smiles and laughter, he could get her out of it.
"Kagome. Remember that night, when I lost my powers as a demon? The night that the spider demons attacked? Well, when i was poisoned, you took care of me! You let me lie in your lap! YOU SHED TEARS FOR ME! Please, Kagome, don't leave me! Not like this! I cannot attack you! Come back to me Kagome!"
Kagome looked as if she did not hear a word that he had just said. She kept moving forward, toward Inuyasha.
"DAMN! IT DIDN'T WORK!"
"Give it up, Inuyasha. Nothing will work. She is my demon now, and I have taken her sole. Word has reached my ears about the mighty preistess inside Kagome, and I want that power. I need that power. So I took her sole. And at the same time, I created a monster. A monster, that finally, my own brother, will not be able to destroy. How convenient."
--------------------------- TO BE CONTINUED.... --------------------------- Well, please post reviews! It's nice knowing what people think of one's work. :) Thank you!
PS. should i continue with the series? or just stop? Its up to you