-1 "Carrot-Top"

Year one

Lily had flaming red hair that could be seen among the many students, and her startling green eyes flashed with excitement as she was sorted into Gryffindor… she was stepping out of her class to go to lunch when she ran into someone,

"Oh, I'm sorry" said Lilly

She looked up, and there stood James Potter, a boy that had dark messy hair, brown eyes, and sneer on his face as he looked at her,

"Watch it carrot-top"

I'll show you to watch it

Lily pulled her wand out of her pocket at pointed it strait at the boy,

"Miss Evans!" said the voice of professor McGonagall

Good, professor McGonagall will back me up

"Five points from Gryffindor miss Evans"

What, five points Lily was just about to talk back when a girl put her arm around her and steered her away,

"You do not want to say any thing when a teacher takes away points" the girl said to her… They walked into the Grate Hall, and sat down.

Year Six

Now six years later, Lily is best friends with the girl.

Makiya Lane was rather outgoing, but at times she just sits back and listens to other people talk. She's just about an inch taller than Lily, and about the same build as her. and has dark wavy hair that comes down to the middle of her back, but the strangest thing about her is that she has one eye that is purple and the other a bright celery green, it's the one thing she liked most about her self.

But back to are story. Lily and Makiya decided to stay at school for Christmas brake, and so did the marauders (minus wormtile)

Lily and Makiya where the only ones in the common room, every one ellts was out sided playing in the snow.

"I'm bored out of my mined!" said Lily,

"But you're being to lazy to get up" said Makiya, who had already asked her to go out side with her five times

"So Lily, can I ask you a question?"

"Why not" said Lily

"Do you like James?"

"WHAT?" Lily shot strait up in her chair "Why do you think that"

"Well" said Makiya "I just think you do, I don't know why,"

"I HATE Potter,"

"I think you do like him Lily"

"Oh shut up" said Lily. Makiya got out of her chare and walked up to there dorm

"Where are you going?" asked Lily, and about thirty secons later she came back down carrying hers and Lily's winter coats and boots

"Were going out side" said Makiya. She threw Lily's stuff at her and started pulling on her own boots.