AN!: Alright
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I got two good reviews from the same people that commented last time, but I'm still determined to write this.
Its going to be slow in the beginning but I promise it will be good.

not to metion I have tons of energy to write this thing, plus since i came out that i write fanfictions to friends I got lots of support and im determined :D

And yes, if you didnt read my one shot, this story may be disturbing as it goes on you've been warned.
I don't own Naruto Or the lyrics that go along with my story Little peice of heaven by avenged sevenfold

look the lyrics up, I'm not going to include them this time. It only confuses people D:

Oh and this chapter is short but It turned out very nicely, so read and review I promise you will not be dissapointed

THIS CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE VERY CLEAN AND NOTHING LIKE THE REST OF THE STORY, I AM SORRY. D:

PS: i dont have a beta reader, so dont be mad about bad grammer and such.

Hinata almost fainted as all her power was put into one of her young patients. While her patients heart beat only seemed to be getting softer, her's was speeding. And thus it continued until she gave away her last bit of power. Only to after to be surrounded by total blackness.

She awoke with unclear faces murmuring beside her until she heard, "Look, she's awake." The voice sounded elderly and soft. She felt her head throbbing and her chest aching. She moved with difficulty, she only managed to turn over on the hospital bed she was placed on. She was about to go back to rest until the memory of what had happened earlier returned. She jolted up, forgetting the ache she had and managed in a hoarse voice, "What happened to him!?" And a shock of pain waved threw her body causing her to flinch. "Oh dear, please lie back down." The delicate voice said. Hinata did as she was told. "You saved him," The voice continued. "Hes sleeping in the room next to us. " Hinata's vision started to sharpened to see a older women's whose wrinkles only showed her wisedom and her smile showed her billiant personality. The other face was of a younger man's, he was about the age of Hinata. His face showed relieve and she couldn't help but notice how handsome he was. He spoke up and it seemed he was choking back tears, "Thank you for saving my b-brother." And with that he broke into a sob. But one of joy not pain. The elderly lady turned to Hinata and grabbed her pale hand and dropped a small blue pendent in her grip. "This is for saving my grandson, if you are ever in trouble and to the point where you are about to die, do this justu and your soul with return to your body in only hours of your death." She announce and came towards Hinata and told her what she would need to do for the pendent to work. Hinata gave a half-hearted smile and thanked the lady as she left. She stayed in bed for the rest of her shift, until she found the strength to walk to her apartment.

When she arrived Sasuke was already inside it with a dozen roses, his smile and stance seemed awkward. Something must be wrong Hinata thought. Sasuke walked toward Hinata and hastiley gave Hinata the flowers. "These are absoultly beautiful Sasuke." she softy said as she began to inhale the sent of her gift. She walked into the kitchen to get a vase, and while she was doing so Sasuke started to pace around her living room. His mind was occupied and Hinata could tell but she figured she would wait for him to tell her. "Hey hun, I'm going to make dinner for us is that alright?" She asked from the other room. She didn't hear anything in reply until Sasuke walked in the room with a confused expression on his face "Hinata, do you love me?" She started to giggle, was this what he was worried about? how silly! "Sasuke of course I do." She said soft with no hints of sarcasm. He stared at her hard, and Hinata decided to convince him. She shyly put her arms around his neck, her face going red with what she was about to do and softly pressed her lips onto his. But this didn't satisfy him, Sasuke wanted more, and his kisses got more firce and it was making Hinata nervous. His kisses devoured hers, and his tounge started to push through her mouth making Hinata feel unconfortable. He felt her haste and decided to head his kisses down south causing Hinata to gasp. She started to shake as he tried to lift up her shirt. "Sasuke!" She screamed, "Dont!" He looked up and looked down at her exposed skin and kissed her stomech before he but her shirt down. "Sorry, I can't control myself." He murmured feeling embarrassed at what he had just done. I should of known better. Sasuke thought. She's still a virgin and I should wait til she's ready.

Hinata bite her lip trying to find a way to end the silence that had just erupted, "Uh, I-I'm going to make D-diner." She said just above a whisper. Sasuke nodded and quickly moved himself out of her way. He decided sitting on the couch in the other room would be the best to do. He needed alot to think about. I want her so badly. thought Sasuke as he began to think of the shy girl pre-paring dinner for him in the other room. He knew he never wanted anyone more than her, he never wanted her to leave his side. His thought continued and worries entered his head. He reached in his pocket and pulled out the beautiful, expensive gift he was planning to give to her. He played with it. What will I do if she refuses...? His thoughts were stopped from the sound of Hinata's voice. "Dinner's ready!" She shouted from the other room. He quickly got up and took a chair at the table. Hinata came back with a dinner for two in her hands and he carefully set them down on the table. The two began to eat in awkward silence, usually Sasuke would break silence when they ate but he was completely lifeless, he only stared down at his food. Hinata could tell he was in deep thought. "Is something wrong with the food I could..." Hinata began. But Sasuke snapped his head up and said "Oh no, Its great." His food was completely untouched. "Is something wrong, it seems there is, you know your problems are my problems also."she said in a compassionate voice, trying to understand the situation. He only sighed it was now or never. He got out of his seat and face Hinata, and got down one knee. "Hinata, will you marry me?" He felt his guts spill out the the floor as he said those words, but figuatively of course.

:D cliffhanger! review if you want more!
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Review even if you hate it :D

ARG, I'm Hyper so if you guys review quick enough I might even update this story tonight, since my friend bailed on me andddd i have nothing to do tonight xD so yeah review.
im gunna go for 6 reviews alright? :D so review and if it goes to 6 I'll start writing more

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