My first story EVER. Excuse my english I'm not a native speaker.

I don't own anything!

For the last time?

Chapter one

The first thing he noticed was pain. His whole body hurt. It was getting unbearable and he still wasn't sure if it was just a very bad nightmare or if it was real. Then he started fainting again and God ,he welcomed it. He felt like if he was falling. Peacefully drowning in the darkness.

So... this is it? The end?
And with this thought he passed out.

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When John Sheppard slowly opened his eyes the pain was still there. Only sign of light was coming somewhere above him and he had no idea where he was, how he got there and what happened to him. Last thing he remembered was going trough stargate on a mission with his team. It was a routine exploring mission but it apparently went wrong.

He tried to get up but his aching body failed him and he ended up on a ground once again.
He groaned in pain. At least now he was sure that his right leg is broken and few of his ribs probably too because even breathing hurt.

Then he remembered his team again. He had no idea if they ended up same way.

''McKay!...'' he tried to shout but failed too. Now he was sure that his ribs were broken.

''What the hell is going on?!'' he said to himself quietly.

He looked up at the light. There was a little hole in the ceiling of the room and the only source of light. It was like seven meters above him.
He didn't see any other entrance to the room so he guessed he must fell down. It would explain his broken bones but his last memory has still been going through the gate.

Despite the pain he crawled to the nearest wall so he could take a better look of where the hell was he.
He wasn't pleased with a sight. Not at all. There were some bones lying in the corners, chains on the stone walls , some broken ladder and one mouse sniffing around the bones.

''So...it doesn't look like we are getting out of here any time soon, right?'' he said to the mouse.

,,You know, my friends are probably looking for me right now. When they'll find us, I'm taking you with me, I promise. You will need a name...'' He thought about the right name but one was still on his mind.

''What about Elizabeth, do you like it?'' He smiled at ridiculousness of all of this. He was caught in some hole, hurt, without water or food and talking to mouse he named after his lost love.

Oh god how he missed her. She would do anything to find him but with Woolsey... he wasn't so sure.
But his team won't give up on him. They will find him. He just had to believe.

His mind went back to his beloved women. Every night he had terrible nightmares about her. About what could have replicators done to her before they killed her.

And it's all your fault... because you leave her there, John. You didn't save her. The voice in his had said.

He felt so weak. There was too much pain, physical and mental. He couldn't bear it.

'Elizabeth...' he called her name before passing our again.