This is the beginning of an Oblivion Story. I would like review from the people who read it. I will accept advice and constructive criticism.
Miaka is a mage. After several years he had obtained Arch Mages position in the mages guild. Forsaken is a knight who has done may a noble things. He is in the blades and Master of the fighter's guild. Hericia is a master archer and is leader of the Blackwood Company. Raziel is a thief. What ever they need he gets them. He is the head thief of the thieves' guild. They all had one thing in common. They met in Kvatch.
This is their stories.