Hey there I decided to write a suspian! YAY! So please reveiw on my new storyxxxxxxx

This story is set after the voyage of the dawn treader and here is the character ages:

Capian:21

Peter:21

Susan:18

Edmund:17

Lucy: 15

Peter stared at himself in his and Edmunds bedroom, he adjusted his black tie and brushed down his black jacket. He looked at himslef and for a minute he saw himself as the king he was a long time ago. He turned around in the room searching for his comb. They had shared a room ever since him and Susan had moved back form America. Life in America was very hard, Susan had been depressed ever since she had left Caspian a few years ago. There parents had set Susan up on so many dates, he had rescued her in many bad situations involving angry Americans towering over her at her refusal for a kiss, boys in America were most certainly not gentlemen. She never wanted a boyfriend especially thoose mother and father had picked out. As her big brother none would never be approved of by him naturally but he was sworn to protect her no matter what. Peter himself had not found anyone at all, he didn't need anyone, he was a king all that mattered was protecting his family. Something it had been even more ever since they had move back to London, after there parents death. Peter sighed and look at the ground. They had been killed by a nazi spy, Peter could not describe his hatred for the nazi party they had caused so much destrubtion for five years now when if ever will it stop. It had caused so much pain amongst his family and for him.

Edmund looked at himself behind peter and comb his hair over into a side parting. He had never been the same since his parents had died, he had not seen them for five years and now it would be never again, he wanted so badly to go back, although like his siblings he was told he could never go back. He had to leave school to work with Peter to pay for there apartment, he was seventeen though so it never affected him that much, but Edmund had grown up so much mentally and physically, he was no longer a stupid little boy.

In the next room Lucy was drying her tears with her hankercheif from Narnia, she hated the fact of knowing she would never see her parents again. Out of all her siblings she was effected the most through her parents death, she was after all the youngest. Moving back to London had been hard she had to start school in London, it was the only school left in London after the air raides it was crowded, she had no one there for her since Peter and Edmund had started work in a factory and Susan as a shop girl, all to fund there apartment. She was pushed and shoved around a lot and cried a lot but not in front of her siblings she could not bring them any more heart ache than what they had already received. She looked across the room at Susan.

Susan was pinning her hair up around her face she had lost a lot of weight ever since she said goodbye to Caspian, she no longer felt the need to eat, especially since her parents death. Her whole life now felt like she was on a long spiraled staircase being pushed down into a deep dark endless hole every thing felt pointless and she wondered when would she be able to live again. Work was hard men used to come into the shop just to see her, the boys who worked in the shop were just the same if not worse she always kept it to herself she could not be a burden on her family more than she had already, crying all the time over Caspian, oh how she missed he dark chocolate eyes and hair. His charming voice which made her melt like butter. She was so sad after hearing that Edmund and Lucy had gone back to Narnia but Lucy had assured her that he missed her just as much as she missed him. She looked at Lucy wiping her tears, she walked over to her and embraced her.

"Susan, Lucy!"she heared her brother's voice calling them and took a deep breath and took Lucy's hand ready for there parents funeral.

They walked into the hall and Edmund took Lucy's hand and held it tight.

Peter placed his arm around Susan and tried to look brave as they exited the house ready for the funeral.

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