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Chapter One
Raquelle was a beautiful young elleth. After her parents left her, she was sent to live with her harsh Aunt and Uncle. These relatives of hers were mortal but they were still cruel. They tortured her every chance they got, but when a handsome young elf comes and rescues her, what will happen? Will she be loved like she always wanted, or will she be forced to live the cruel life that she has known forever?
"Raquelle!" yelled her aunt. " Take my dirty clothes and clean them till they are spotless! I want them in my possession in the morning, no later than 10am!" Helpless Raquelle had no choice in her actions.
"Yes Aunt, first thing in the morning!"
Raquelle was different from the whole town. She was the only one of her kind. She was an elleth. Raquelle was a maid in her Aunt and Uncle's home. She was a beautiful young elleth. Raquelle had long blonde hair, she was very thin and pale. She had amazing clear, glass-like blue eyes. Her eyes were the most fascinating thing about her. Her eyes could express anything and sometimes hide her emotions very well. Most humans despised her. Why, she could never figure out. Raquelle never made friends with people from Watersway, they always were either afraid of her, or they didn't want to be bothered by her.
Her mother, who was an elleth, died when giving birth to her, and her father's family who were mortals, took her in and cared for her. Their relationship was similar to Arwen and Aragorns relationship. Raquelle despised her Aunt and Uncle. They mistreated her in many ways. Her Uncle abused her many times.
Raquelle lived in a town called Watersway. She hated where she lived. All the men were malicious and disgusting. She often dreamed to be in a place with beautiful waterfalls, green grass with many flowers, mountains in her view and the sound of rustling trees and of the birds singing. But sadly she was stuck in a worm hole filled with savages and women handlers
"Here are your clothes Aunt" announced Raquelle.
"Your Uncle has important business with you in the guestroom."
Raquelle's heart skipped a beat. The last time he said that he forced her to sleep with him or he would kill her.
What does he want? I cant do what he asks of me. I can't do it again, I'm so scared of these people, thought Raquelle.
Tears welled up in her eyes thinking of the horrible possibilities that could occur. Her heart pounded, and she was almost able to hear it. She walked slowly towards the thick white door and entered. He was pacing around the room looking confused.
"Yes, you called for me?" spoke Raquelle.
" Everyone knows about the other night. The people in town are talking. Did you go and tell your friends what happened? By the way I didn't even know you had any. My wife knows also. She's threatening me she'll leave me. This is way out of control."
His eyes got bloodshot red, and his fist rolled up in a ball. He threw a punch to her face and stomach. Raquelle gave a cry and dropped to the floor.
" Stop, I didn't tell anyone, please just stop!" The more she cried for him to stop the harder he kicked her. Her blue eyes saw blood and she fell into unconsciousness. This did not stop him from beating the crap out of her. Out of her helplessness the door swung open. The Uncle paused in mid punch.
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