Chapter One
Swiftpaw scowled as he saw Cloudpaw becoming a warrior even though he had started his training before him. He glared at the newly named Cloudtail sheathing and unsheathing his claws. Then he glanced at Brightpaw smiling, he would never admit it to her, but he had a huge crush on her. "Come lets get all the apprentices together, I want to have a meeting in the apprentice den," he whispered in her ear and watched as she ran off. Then he headed to the apprentice den running into Thornpaw and Ashpaw along the way. " I'm calling a meeting in the apprentice den, and it's concerns all apprentices," he told them and continued on towards the apprentice den and was followed by Thornpaw and Ashpaw who shared a look of confusion. He looked sat down in his nest and smiled when Brightpaw came into the den followed by Ashpaw.
"Now, listen up, Bluestar has ignored us long enough, and it's time for her to notice us," Swiftpaw growled lashing his tail and pacing around.
"And how do you suppose we do that?" Thornpaw asked curiously.
"By going after whatever is stealing our prey," Swiftpaw snarled turning to face them his eyes blazing.
"I don't know it sounds to dangerous," Ashpaw meowed.
"Well, then you don't have to go," Swiftpaw meowed.
"I agree with Ashpaw," Fernpaw meowed.
"Me too," Thornpaw meowed.
"Well, I think Swiftpaw has a point, so I'm going with him," Brightpaw meowed getting shockedglancesgf rom her brother, Thornpaw, and Ashpaw and Fernpaw.
"Good we'll leave at moon high," Swiftpaw meowed his eyes shining.
Brightpaw listened to the sounds of her sleeping den mates glancing over at Swiftpaw just in time to see him rise out of his nest.
"Come on let's go," Swiftpaw whispered slipping out of the apprentice den followed by Brightpaw. Then he led her across the camp making sure that Cloudtail hadn't noticed them before he led her into the dirt place tunnel. Soon they entered the forest and he led her to snake rocks. He sniffed the air and wrinkled his nose against the scent, "Oh yuck," he muttered looking around. Then he heard a low growl and spun around to see three huge dogs blocking the way they had just come. "Run," he yowled fleeing towards snake rocks Brightpaw right behind. Then he slid to a stop his fur spiking up in fear when he realized that they were trapped. He turned to face the dogs feeling fear shoot through him when he saw one grab Brightpaw by her head and throw her across the clearing. 'I can't them touch Brightpaw again," he thought slashingsat the dogs. He felt one grab him by his tail and throw him into snake rocks causing him to black out.
Well how did you like this chapter and Swiftpaws injuries will be described in the second chapter I always thought that he should have survived and become Brightpaws mate.