This is my first fan fiction, and this one is going to be about Lysander and my candy. He's my favorite character so far. I accept constructive criticism also.
- Prologue
The girl walked into the school. She had blonde hair that with the tips dyed black. She had white Victorian era boots and bright red skinny jeans over them. She had on a tight, (but not too revealing) black short sleeved shirt with white lines fancily painted and streamed around the whole shirt.
Her sapphire eyes scanned the school obviously looking for someone. She spotted the principal of the school, and ran to catch up to her.
"Are you the new student here at Sweet Amoris?" the principal asked cheerily.
The new student gave her the look of, "Really? You're gonna ask that question," but she answered politely, "Yes."
"Ok could you please go to the student council room to receive your enrollment from Nathaniel?" the principal asked.
She nodded and headed to the Student Council room, not bothering to knock, and opened the door. "Is Nathaniel in here?" she asked.
There was only person in the room and he turned around. He had a white ironed shirt with a blue tie that was also ironed. His breast pocket had a couple pens and pencils clipped to it. His khaki pants were probably also ironed, and his blonde, almost golden, hair was combed but pieces still stuck out. The most dazzling thing about him was his eyes; they were golden, and when he blinked they sparkled.
"Yes that's me. Are you Evelyn Caspers?" he answered.
"That's me! And yes I have my $25 and I.D." she said handing him the requirements.
"Great, well here's your map. Welcome to Sweet Amoris!" Even though he sounded sincere, he probably had to say this to every new student.
Evelyn left the Student Council room to begin her new year at Sweet Amoris.
Just to let you know my other chapters will be in first person, but I'm not still sure if I'm going to Lysander's POV. Well let me know what you think. Constructive criticism approved.