----------*Disclaimer* Ok, it's pretty obvious I don't own Tenchi, and I'm not claiming I do. I'm just putting this here because it looks natural at the top.----------------------
(This is my first attempt at a fanfic, so give me your worst. I want every detail of what you like and don't like about the story so that I can use the opinions to better future stories and chapters. I know this one is kinda short, but the Future chapters promise to be a bit longer. Enjoy.)
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Banishment...a torment above all others for mortal men...and it has been wrought on me. How I sought to be free from my imprisonment, sought to see the light of day once more and fill my lungs with renewing breath. Only now, after so much work, so much pain, have I accomplished my goal, granted my own wish. I escaped.
But my focus is not on this triumph now, oh no, I have moved my thoughts to a much simpler goal, one that is quite reasonable, and understandable to any that have been in my predicament. What I want now, is revenge! Revenge on the one who forced me into my imprisonment in that cold, dark limbo.
Ha ha, I shall make him to suffer the same fate I was made to suffer. I shall encase him in the same eternal darkness that passed my every waking hour, in a world neither living nor dead. It will be quite easy, for the stupid boy thinks I'm dead. The fool, he disillusions himself with thoughts that all danger has passed for the time being. He has convinced himself that I am dead to ease his own weary mind and fears, his peril has not ended, oh no, it has just begun. He shall not have a chance against my power, for you see, I have had a long time to think about how to do this.
Perhaps I shall destroy the others too. This is not necessary, but it may be fun. And though I would have liked to preserve her before, it seems I am no longer left with the option, for the one who has restored my life wished her dead. But oh how I will cherish Yosho's demise, relish every moment of his screams as I tear him apart. This enjoyment shall be doubled upon dealing the same to his grandson Tenchi, oh how I despise that name. I shall laugh when I hear his screams of pain ringing out through the night air.
The earth shall feel my wrath, oh yes. They all will know my plight, for now is the hour of my redemption. The powers given to me by the dark lord shall be felt throughout their damned families.
Let them all feel the wrath, of Kagato!
(This is my first attempt at a fanfic, so give me your worst. I want every detail of what you like and don't like about the story so that I can use the opinions to better future stories and chapters. I know this one is kinda short, but the Future chapters promise to be a bit longer. Enjoy.)
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Banishment...a torment above all others for mortal men...and it has been wrought on me. How I sought to be free from my imprisonment, sought to see the light of day once more and fill my lungs with renewing breath. Only now, after so much work, so much pain, have I accomplished my goal, granted my own wish. I escaped.
But my focus is not on this triumph now, oh no, I have moved my thoughts to a much simpler goal, one that is quite reasonable, and understandable to any that have been in my predicament. What I want now, is revenge! Revenge on the one who forced me into my imprisonment in that cold, dark limbo.
Ha ha, I shall make him to suffer the same fate I was made to suffer. I shall encase him in the same eternal darkness that passed my every waking hour, in a world neither living nor dead. It will be quite easy, for the stupid boy thinks I'm dead. The fool, he disillusions himself with thoughts that all danger has passed for the time being. He has convinced himself that I am dead to ease his own weary mind and fears, his peril has not ended, oh no, it has just begun. He shall not have a chance against my power, for you see, I have had a long time to think about how to do this.
Perhaps I shall destroy the others too. This is not necessary, but it may be fun. And though I would have liked to preserve her before, it seems I am no longer left with the option, for the one who has restored my life wished her dead. But oh how I will cherish Yosho's demise, relish every moment of his screams as I tear him apart. This enjoyment shall be doubled upon dealing the same to his grandson Tenchi, oh how I despise that name. I shall laugh when I hear his screams of pain ringing out through the night air.
The earth shall feel my wrath, oh yes. They all will know my plight, for now is the hour of my redemption. The powers given to me by the dark lord shall be felt throughout their damned families.
Let them all feel the wrath, of Kagato!