The Coins: Deleted Reviews
These are the reviews that were deleted when I changed the format of The Coins from individual stories to a chapter format.
I appreciate all your reviews and comments so much, I wanted to find a way to save them somehow.
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coin Series: History
GinaStar
2007-01-30
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"What's the worst that could happen" Ok, you just jinxed it!! lol!
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coin Series: #2 Reunions
TricksterWolf
2007-01-31
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I'm really liking this. You give enough backstroy so that we don't get lost, but don't bog the current storyline down with it.
However, I agree with Robertmurrin that scenebreaks would be helpful.
Robertmurrin
2007-01-30
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Very well done. An original concept with excellent execution. Don't find too many stories like that around here. You've also managed to create an OC that I like. Very cool. I hope we learn more about the Nova Rangers in future chapters, maybe even meet them. You should really use page breaks whenever the scene changes, though. It would make it easier to read. Keep up the good work!
The Gallant Ranger
2007-01-30
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Excellent! Very well done. You set up great with the history portion, and it flowed wonderfully into the first official chapter. I especially like how we are slowly discovering more about Jason's and Kim's powers, and how we are always learning something mnew about Carri is a wonderful point as well.
I like how we don't learn anything about any of the villians until the end, and when we do it's only their names, and a very vauge decription of their goals. It adds mystery as to what they are capable of and how the rangers will deal with them.
Speaking of rangers, I hope we learn more about the Nova Rangers soon as I'm am very curious of their powers and if they were successful in finding Zordon and the Power Coins.
I like the playful banter between Kim and Tommy about red and pink at the end as well. It gives hope they can work it out to at least become good friends.
Overall this is extremely well done, and I look forward to reading more as soon as you can produce it.
-The Gallant Ranger
GinaStar
2007-01-30
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Excellent! Love it!
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coin Series: #3 Everything Old
KJ
2007-02-05
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Loved the new chapter. The story is getting exciting. Can't wait to see where it heads next.
GinaStar
2007-02-05
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Very interesting!!
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coin Series: #4 DeJaVu
GinaStar
2007-02-16
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Well written and interesting. I look forward to part 5.
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coin Series: #5 Home Again: Pt 1
prettynpink8
2007-02-25
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Amazing story and I love your series...everything is written so well and I'm really impressed with all of the character development. Keep up the good work!
Robertmurrin
2007-02-23
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You know what? I am really REALLY loving this story. The Red Assembly is a really cool idea, and, though I didn't care for SPD at all, I like the hints about the future of the Power Rangers. This is an incredibly well rounded story, and I would hate to see it discontinued, as is often (unfortunately) the case with many stories this enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
GinaStar
2007-02-23
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YES!! You finally got Billy and Trini together!! Way to go!
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coins Series: #6 Home Again Pt 2
KJ
2007-03-12
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I very much enjoyed this story. If this chapter was a challenge for you, I think you did very well with it.
GinaStar
2007-03-06
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Excellent story! Am really enjoying it!! Are you eventually going to put them together in one long version instead of separate entries?
Reviews For: Power Rangers: The Coins Series: #7: Back to Action
Brian Crowe
2007-03-17
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Thoroughly impressed thus far. The characterization is well defined. Really enjoying the story. I can't wait for the next installment.
KJ
2007-03-17
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Very good as usual. Each story leaves me on the edge of my seat excited for more :)
GinaStar
2007-03-16
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Excellent! I loved it!! Each Chapter gets better and better!!
littlewhitelie91
2007-03-16
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omg omg! i loved the jason and kim frienship connection thingy moment (i know... aren't i articulate? lol!) and its the beginning of tommy and kim again
! yess!