Hitori Janai (Re-write)

A/N: Ok, I had a penname, it was PeachGirl but then I kinda got disappointed on the stories I wrote because frankly, they suck and since I read alot of GOOD fanfics, made by GOOD writers, I got a little better, I hope. Well, if any of you read "Hitori Janai" the original one, this is a re-write, same plot, different writing.

Oh, and it's going to be TAITO later on so I'm just warning you guys, that's all.

(Italian is like the past, dream, anything that's not in the present, just in case you guys get confused)

Chapter One: Lucky Lady Bugs. (random title)

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"Takeru, look at this, it's a lady bug." said Yamato, age 10, he picked it up gently off the leaf to show it to his eager brother. A younger boy looked at it and took it off his brother's hand. He gazed at it..

"It's supposed to bring you luck." said Yamato smiling, knowing that his brother was enjoying watching the bug crawl over his arm, giggling. Then the wind blew, harshly making the red, black dotted bug fly away. Yamato frowned but saw Takeru staring out in the sky smiling.

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"Takeru, you're crushing me, move over!" said Yamato, wincing.

"I'm trying to but Taichi is crushing me!" replied Takeru, pushing Taichi, causing Taichi to squish Hikari.

"Oniichan!, you're crushing me now!" said Hikari, pushing Taichi causing Taichi to bump into Takeru.

"Taichi, move over so Takeru won't kill my bones!" yelled Yamato, his cheek against the window of the car.

"Can you guys settle down?!" said an angry voice from the driver's seat.

"Sorry Mr.Ishida" said Hikari as she silently mouthed Taichi to move.

"Can't help that this car is small!" whispered Taichi to Hikari. Hikari lightly punched Taichi on the shoulders. Taichi smiled and punched Hikari back lightly. After a few minutes of punching and giggling Taichi looked out the window and saw the sea, and the sand. They were here. The car reversed and parked into an empty spot, then they heard a crash.

"Oh no, please tell me that you didn't crash into another car again, Dad." said Yamato groaning.

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"Takeru, why are you smiling? Aren't you sad that the lady bug flew away?"

"No, I don't need luck, I already am lucky. I get to see my Oniichan, can't I?" Yamato smiled. "And that lady bug is looking for it's family, it doesn't want to be alone."

"Of course." He hugged his smaller brother and stared out in the sky with him too. He learned something valuable from someone younger, that was something lucky and he was right, no one should be alone.

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"Finally, we're here!" said Takeru happily stretching out his arms and breathing the cool air. He turned to his side and laughed at the sight of his older brother, with sunscreen all over his hair.

"Taichi, when I say put some sunscreen on me, I didn't mean to put it in my hair!" growled Yamato, trying his best to get it off, it failed. "Where's the shower stalls?"

"Just wash it off in the beach." said Taichi smirking at his work. "I'm sure you'll get most of it o-hey!" Yamato squirted some sunscreen into his hair too.

"Don't worry Taichi, I'm sure that it'll wash off." said Yamato with a smiling.

"Let's just swim," suggested Hikari. "We're starting to get looks from the people."

"Maybe it's because of Taichi's huge bushy hair that's also white."

"Or maybe it's because of you're bright yellow blonde hair!"

"Will you two shut up?!" yelled one of the men that were sunbathing near them. Taichi, Hikari, Yamato, and Takeru started to walk off while Taichi and Yamato were still mouthing eachother about their hair.

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Takeru and Yamato were snuggled up under a tree in the shade sleeping. None of them noticed another lady bug landing on Takeru's nose. Takeru wrinked his nose and the lady bug still stayed. Then Takeru scratched his nose, and the lady bug along with it. Another harsh wind went by and Takeru snuggled closer to his brother.

"...Oniichan.." mumbled Takeru. Yamato slowly opened his eyes and yawned. He looked down and saw Takeru hugging around his waist tightly. Yamato smiled a tired smile and closed his eyes.

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"This water's freezing!" said Taichi as he walked into the waters, splashing. Yamato followed him and carried a float, he jumped on it and closed his eyes. Yep, another relaxing day..

"Taichi, help us make this castle!" yelled Hikari from the shore, Taichi swam to her and walked out of the water. He sat next to her and got a shovel. He looked out into the sea and saw Yamato all alone laying on his float.

"You think I should go watch him, I mean, he can't swim good can he?"

"Don't worry, Oniichan can swim and besides, he likes to relax out in the sea, and not get bothered." said Takeru digging and scooping up sand placing where the castle was supposed to be made.

"Ok, now, how big are we making this castle?"

"Big."

"How big?"

"Huge."

"How huge?"

"Just help us make this."

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Takeru woke up with a small yawn and saw his brother still asleep. He got up and walked to go get a drink of water. He didn't drink in a while. He walked off to look for a nearby water fountain.

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Yamato woke up a few minutes later and saw no brother in his arms. "Takeru..?" Yamato started to panic when he looked around and saw no one around. "Takeru??" asked Yamato, more panic in his voice. He looked around and saw a small crowd. Yamato crawled under the people's legs, he was lucky that he was skinny and only ten years old. Yamato's eyes widened as he saw a small boy there with blood pouring out of his forehead. "Takeru!!"

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So, how'd you like this so far? Good, bad? It's pretty late right now so I should just end it here. *smile* Please review! I can't handle flames, but if you think it sucked that bad, then flame but if you're against Taito or something, and complaining, then I'll just ignore that review. Well, please review! ^_^ My birthday was yesterday, so this is a perfect late present. *hint hint* And since I'm lazy, I bet I'm gonna not finish this in a while, gomen. But who knows. Reviews help me alot. *nudge*

Oh and I know that this chapter kinda is rushed, but don't worry, I'll make it longer later on. And I bet the rating will go higher. Well why are you reading this? Review! ^_^