Is my first song-poem-fic-thing so be nice okay?

The first installment is called 'My Family'

I am in this house all alone,

It's just because you've started to roam,

I can wait for you, for always,

So Mama, please hurry on home.

The people in this house are very few,

Mama's gone and now, you are too,

I can wait for Mama, for always,

So Papa, I can wait for you.

Recently Grandpa's been very sad,

And I'm wondering if I have been real bad,

I can for Mama and Papa always,

So I'll wait for the smile Grandpa always had.

Time and time again my fears take hold,

That I'll never see you when I grow old,

I will wait for all of you, for always,

I'm waiting for knowledge you have told.

You've all been gone from home for very long,

I'm wondering if I did something really wrong,

I can wait for you three, for always,

So until then, I have to be strong.

Tohru suddenly awoke from her dream, suddenly realizing the sad, sad fact…

today of all days was the anniversary of her father's death…

the day when she, thirteen years ago, made such a song, to help herself be brave.