Mystery Island

Hey everyone!! This is my first fan-fic! I hope you'll like as much as my friends do: Oh and please tell me how I'm doing!! Also I'll be using a bit of Japanese words (I'm learning a few words since I can't wait for the English translations of Maloki TT)


So forgive me if I misuse the words!! Enjoy .

Disclaimer Here to help is my friend Freyr!!

Please tell them Freyr the sad news. "What? Has something happened to my Yamato Nadeshiko?" Oh Freyr you're such a kidder. (Punches playfully his shoulder) "Ouch, alright then, Phantomloki does not in any sort of way own Matantei Loki. (Ducks as I swing a flying pot) It is true, but must you say it so nonchalantly!! (sniff tearsniff) "I'm sorry but, will I get any scenes with my love?" (Me thinks I can control him, hehe) We'll just have to see, now won't we? Now open the story won't you? (Dark black cloud glooms over his head, and he sticks out an umbrella) "Please enjoy the first chapter of Mystery Island, were I and my Yamato Nadeshiko will star in an epic love story, (looks at me) Um, what, I meant was…. Just read okay! (Runs Away) Wait! I still need you for the ending!!


Chapter One- Surprise

The stars were twinkling, and the crescent moon came into view. She had woken at from her nightmare. The air felt rather cold as the breeze hit her face, sending stray pieces of pink hair flying. Her crimson red eyes looked at her surroundings. Everything looked spookier outside the temple. She shivered as the dream replayed in her mind. Why did she feel like something was going to happen? Maybe it was the over night pizza Narugami, delivered last night at Loki-kun's?

It was quite a surprise when she went to open the door and Narugami popped into view.

"Stormy Restaurant grantees; fresh pizza to dine, for fine cuisine and in time to eat!"

Mayura almost fell backwards as she heard this but Loki's reaction had been better.

"Why Narukami, I see you found another odd-end job" He started to smirk and grabbed the pizzas away from him.

"I believe the Stormy Restaurant also grantees fresh pizza in under twenty minutes and,"He looked at his watch and gave him a vampire smile. "It's already been twenty-one minutes, so I assume you'll take it to heart and not be paid for your services."

Narugami's mouth just dropped to the ground as Loki closed the door in his face and smirked as he went toward the kitchen. She laughed but felt bad for Narugami. It wasn't his fault Loki-kun's standards were high. She opened the door and saw him with an umbrella out, as a black clouded loomed over his head, pouring rain

"Here, take this but don't tell Loki-kun."

His face lighted up and a mysterious light shined into his face. "Oh Daidoji, you're a life saver! I just can't lose another job. My landlord just made the rent even higher. I'm sure god will reward you for your help tonight."

She smiled but shook her head. "Narugami I'm helping you because I want to. Not because of some god."

Narugami's eyes widened. "Daidoji, do you believe in god?" This was the girl who believed that Loki had aliens living in his backyard. How could she not believe in god, he himself was a god.

Mayura looked at him as her eyes portrayed her true thoughts. "No I don't…" She then smiled and waved goodbye and went inside to eat pizza.

Now as she sat down on the steps to the temple, her mind replayed Narugami's question over and over. I didn't entirely tell the truth. There was one god which she believed in, Kami-sama. Things hadn't been the same after Loki-kun had come back. Loki-kun had been acting very weird with me. Things hadn't been the same and It seems weird when I try to open up to him. He was a little kid after all and she didn't want to seem like a burden. She sighed and looked at the moon. Such a pretty thing covered in darkness. Little did she know , that a pair of emerald eyes, was watching the moon as well. Thoughts in turmoil…..

The birds sung in delight as the sun covered the sky. The early dew on the ground was still fresh as Mayura made her way down the park that was near Loki's manor. "I wonder if I'll find any Fushigi mystery's this early?" She walked around the park until she spotted a bench and sat down. She looked at her surrounding. Everything was so quiet, except for the tweets of passing birds. Awkward, this bench had been the same one she had met Kami-sama. She listened to nature around her and felt foot steps. "I must be hearing things."

She closed her eyes and thought about Loki. One month had passed since the disappearance of Loki. She had so desperately tried to find him. Luckily she had met Kami-sama. Even though she tried not to depend and trust people. There was something differently in him that reminded her of Loki. She had realized that without Loki, she didn't have the same passion with mystery that she had. "I want to do something for Loki-kun!"

Maybe if she brought him a very cool client or case, he might stop acting weird around her? She stood up and shook her head. It was a shot, what else could she lose. She started to walk but she tripped over a branch which was on the ground. "Oh No!" She closed her eyes and felt the floor rush toward her face. But the ground felt warm and soft? She dared to open her eyes only to find a pair of deep emerald eyes looking back at her. She blinked.

"My, you should be more careful. Wouldn't want you to get hurt now do we?" The pair of strong arms which held her tight, gave way and helped her stand up. Two emerald eyes mirrored her own.

Is that who I think it is? "Kami-sama?"

The young man smiled and walked her over to the bench again. "How long has it been Mayura?"

She blushed and mumbled something.

"Pardon me, I couldn't quite get that."

She looked at the ground. God this is soooo Embarrassing! -she thought. "Ittadakimasu, Kami-sama."

He smiled at her. "May I be so bold as to enquire what you were doing?"

"Well I needed a bit of fresh air to think some things over."

He looked at her with concern. "What sort of things?"

Mayura laughed and pointed a finger at him. "Don't worry it's just a silly thing."

He arched one of his eyebrows. Why does he remind me of Loki-kin?

"If you want, you can tell me." As he spoke these words, Mayura's eyes darkened. "I…I…I'm confused. You see there's some who I hold very dear but he's been acting so weird with me. I think he doesn't like me anymore… that is if he ever did like me."

Kami-sama's eyes widened a he heard her statement. "Mayura?" He looked at her. This isn't the same Mayura I see at my house "Mayura, I'm sure everything will turn out alright. Give this someone some time."

She lifted her head and turned toward the sky. "You know Kami-sama… I'll bring the old Loki back! Yeah!" She stood up and smiled. "I've got to go! Thanks for everything!"

He stood up and smiled "Mayura!" I bet she's going to get into something. Same old Mayura

She turned backwards. "Huh?" He walked towards her and stopped until he was five inches away.

Don't get into any problems, promise me okay?" He winked at her and patted her head and left.

Maybe I should follow her, demo I still have to go home and eat breakfast (stomach growl) I'm sure she won't get herself into much trouble, right? (That's what you think . )

"He is so Kawaii!!" Mayura looked at her watch. Eight-thirty A.M. "I might as well got to Loki's for breakfast, hehe." She headed towards the exit until she spotted a vendor. "What is that?" The sign read, "Luck of The Draw." Mayura screamed, "Fushigi mystery!" She ran toward the seller. "Hello there, what are you selling?" The seller turned around (guess who?)

"Hello there, today we have a special raffle! For only two bucks, spin this here slot and try to win a prize." The seller had dark brown hair and brown eyes. He also had a wooden sword…

"Narugami! What are you doing over here?"

He smiled and stood up straighter and pointed Mjollnir at the sky." "Working of course. Now spare a few bucks?"

I might as well, I could win a prize! Mayura got out her "ugly green purse" and took out two bucks.

Daidoji really has no taste for purse Narugami grabbed the money "Well, have a go at it."

Mayura started to spin the slot with all the force she could muster. (I can just imagine it)

"Big money, Big Money!!" (Couldn't help myself)

"Remember Daidoji; a black pebble means no prize, and red is a very nice consolation prize."

Oh please, whatever great force that watches over me, please let me win at least something

Finally she let go of the slot and a little pebble came out. Oh please, don't be black

The pebble was obviously neither red nor black. It was a brilliant gold that shined brightly.

"Well what do you get if you have a gold pebble?" Please be something!

Narugami jumped and stared awe struck at Mayura. "Gold… Gold… well that would mean you won the…grand prize."

Hold on did I just hear right?

Mayura stuck her tongue out at him. "Oh Narugami, you're so Hidoi! No, really tell me the truth."

"I'm not kidding Daidoji. I…I can't believe you… won the prize" We didn't intend for Daidoji

to win the prize Mayura suddenly realized that she won the prize. She held the pebble between her hands.

"So what is the grand prize?"

Narugami smiled and gave her a large brochure. "Mystery Island."

Author's Note:

Well how am I doing so far? I think my characters are a bit OOC. Oh please let that not be the case! Well review! I'll update asap. I hate it when authors stop writing or give up on a story (Just kill them all off or something.. I kid.. I kid!) Well until next time. Thanks for reading! Now where are you Freyr (In closet) She'll never find me here TT (Where are you!!)

See ya!!