New-Comer Ch.1
By. EvilSorata
Authors Note: My version of New Comer. I am moving into the Hinata girls dorm as a another apartment Landlord Keitaro is still there for all you people who want to see him get the shit beat out of him. I took someone's idea. You probably know him but I am going to make it better than his. This is set basically set in a different saga of Love Hina, My Saga to be precise. Also my favorite character is Motoko-Chan not Naru-San.Also all your favorite characters will be in it. Including Seta, Sarah, Tama-Chan, Mutsumi, & maybe an appearance from Nayome in later Chapters. I will get hurt a lot ok, but not as much as Keitaro. This fic will be from my point of view, a.k.a First Person view. I hope yall like it. My name is Jason btw.
[To start off I am just wondering around The Hinata Hot Springs. Looking for a job & a place to stay. But no one will hire me so I wonder up some stairs, & find a hotel I knock on the door & a beautiful young girl answers the door.]
???-Yes? May I help you?
[I am over whelmed by her beauty that I can't get a word out so I calm down, & stop from staring at her.]
Me-Hi umm my name is Jake. Umm yeah I was wondering if I could tryout for a job here at this hotel.
???-This isn't a hotel.
Me: It isn't?
[She points to a sign that says All Girls Dorm.]
???-See it's a Girl's dorm not a Hotel.
Me-Aww Shit! Well I can't find a job anywhere here.
[I see a man in the dorm being chased by a girl with a sword.]
Me-umm if this is an all girls dorm why is there a man there?
???-Oh him he the landlord here. He is an exception.
Me-Well I could I be the landlord along with him?
???-Im not sure about it.
Me-Please Miss
[I get down on my hands & knee's & starts begging her. To let me be a landlord at the dorm.]
Me-I need a place to stay look I will pay rent if I have too just please let me stay here. I'll work really hard.
???-Hmmm alright since you begged just get off the ground.
Me-Thank You! [Bow] Yay! [Stands back up.]
???-Hey Keitaro!
Keitaro-Yeah Naru what is it?
Naru-You & this man here will both me landlords here at the dorm so let's show him around, & all that stuff.
Keitaro-Ok that's cool we could get the work done quicker.
Naru-Yeah since you barley doesn't do any work around here.
[I start laughing.]
Keitaro-What's so funny?
Me-You two are funny. Your like newly weds. Are you 2 married by any chance?
Naru-What me married to that dork?
Keitaro-Hey that's mean! By the way what is your name?
Me-Me? Im Jason I came here from America. Actually I was transferred here form America.
Naru-Wow America. Do you go to school here now?
Me-Yeah I go to Tokyo University ever heard of it?
Keitaro-WHAT!! You go to Tokyo U also?
Me-Yeah its kind of funny how I got in I made it in on the first try of the real exam. I don't know how but I got enough points right to get into Tokyo U.
Keitaro-Ha well I slept threw most of the test then when I woke up I sped through the rest of the test. So I ran away & thought I failed.
Naru-Yeah I cant believe he made it in this dork of all people he was a 4th year Ronin.
[Naru hits Keitaro in the head.]
Keitaro-Oww that hurt Naru.
Me-I thank that was the point umm may I come in its getting hot out here.
Naru-Oh sure come on in.
Me-Thank You.
[I step in through the front door, & 5 girls & a flying turtle fill the room.]
Girl#1-Naru who is that man & why is he here?
Girl#2-Oh Naru are you his girlfriend? You little sneak trying to keep it from us.
Naru-What?! Kitsune he is not my boyfriend!
Kitsune-Oh then you don't mind if I have him do you?
Me-Umm you don't even know me. Let alone how old I am.
Kitsune-It doesn't matter.
Girl#3-Ummm Sempai who is that man?
Keitaro-Oh Shinobu this is Jason he is going to be a landlord here with me.
Shinobu-Oh he is?
[I stick my right hand out to Shinobu to shake hands. She just sits there looking at me strangely.]
Me-Umm is anything wrong?
Shinobu-No it's just I never shaken hands before with someone.
Me-Oh im sorry I transferred here from America. Your ways must be different.
[I take my hand back I put it in my right pocket.]
Girld#4-America wow im Sarah I am just staying with these people because my dad left me here so they have to take care of me.
Me-Oh they do must be trouble.
Girl#5-She no trouble at all.
[I look up & see a girl jumping at me & she kicks me in the face. I fly back & hit the wall.]
Sarah-Su he is new here your not supposed to kick him.
Su-But I kick Keitaro all the time. See? Watch?
[Su jumps at Keitaro & kicks him in the face & he fly's into a different wall I did.]
Su-See?
Sarah-But Su Keitaro is immortal. Jason isn't.
[I recover from the kick into the wall.]
Me-Oww she sure is strong isn't she?
Sarah- Yeah she is.
[Another girl enters the room.]
Girl#6-Oh my what was that noise?
Naru-Oh Mutsumi that was Su. She kicked Jason & Keitaro into the wall.
Mutsumi- Who is Jason?
Me-Me I am going to be a landlord here with Keitaro.
Mutsumi-Oh wow that's good for you.
Me-Thank you miss. Naru-You can just call her Mutsumi no need for saying "miss" or "ma'am" here just call everyone by their first names.
Me- Oh ok.
Keitaro-Yeah I called everyone by their first name when I started living here I didn't say miss or ma'am.
Naru-Yeah but you don't have any manners!
[Naru punches Keitaro through the sliding glass door.]
Me-Phew. Im glad that wasn't me.
Naru-Yeah but he is immortal.
Kitsune-Yeah whenever we do something to hurt him he is always fine not even a broken bone.
Me-Wow I would get a few broken bones from her.
Sarah-Yeah no kidding.
[I look over & see a samurai girl just leaning against the wall being silent with her eye's closed.]
Me-Hi im Jason what's yours?
Girl#1-Hmm another week male why does this always happen?
Me-Well I don't know the world is a messed up place.
Girl#1-You are right about that. Well forgive my manners my name is Motoko Ayoma.
Me-Wow a cute name to go with a beautiful girl.
[Motoko blushes.]
Motoko- Don't call me beautiful or cute ok I am a warrior so now you must pay for what you have said.
[Motoko takes her sword out of her case & tries to slash me but I have a sword of my own a Sakabato. I move out of the way of her slash. She move's her sword over to hit me but I pull out my sword & block it.] Me-Heh wow you are good.
Motoko-Im better than you I was trained at the God's Cry School Dojo.
Me-God's cry school never heard of it but oh well I was trained in the Hiten Mitsurugi Ultra Super Sonic Sword Technique. Ya know like in Rurouni Kenshin?
Motoko-Really? I will still win this.
Me-Oh you sure about that?
[I move out of the way & hit her in the back with my sword.]
Me-You so sure now? Your mind was too busy to think of my next move so I saw an opening of attack & took it.
Motoko-Ow [She feels around on her back for a wound but nothings there.] What you didn't slash me?
Me-No I used the blunt side of my sword to hit you.
Motoko-I will win the next fight after I train for a while.
Me-Good ill be waiting pretty girl.
Motoko-Grrrrrr
[Motoko leaves the room & I put my sword away.]
Shinobu-Wow that was awesome.
Keitaro- Yeah you are the second person I have seen that beat Motoko.
Me-Oh really who was the first?
Naru-It was Seta.
Sarah-Yeah my papa.
Me-Wow this guy Seta must be good I might need to challenge him sometime.
Kitsune-Cool I would pay to see that show.
Me-I got a question who or what is that turtle? Naru-Oh that's Tama-Chan she is a hot springs turtle she can fly also.
Me-Oh that explains a lot.
Su-Yeah I think we should eat her Turtle Stu mmmmmm.
Tama-Chan-Myuh
[Tama-Chan flies away & Su chases after Tama.]
Shinobu-Su stop trying to eat Tama-Chan!
[Shinobu chases after Su.]
Me-Umm ok if you don't mind me asking what is Su's religion?
Naru-We really don't know.
Keitaro-Yeah we don't really ask because we know it's none of our business.
Me-Yeah & what's with Motoko? Does she not like losing to males?
Keitaro-She doesn't like males because of her past of her sister I guess.
Me-Oh is that so?
Keitaro-Yeah so my advice would be to stay away from her as much as possible.
Me-Heh I'll think about that but I am tired im going to bed, im so tired.
Naru-Yeah well it is late so I'll see all of you tomorrow morning.
Me-Yeah. [To Keitaro] Heh looks like we will be sharing a room & duties as a landlord.
Keitaro-Yeah.
Me-Im going to bed ok well since I don't have a bed I'll sleep on a couch g'night.
Keitaro-good night.
[Keitaro goes to his room & I fall asleep on the couch.]
End of Chapter 1.
Authors Note: My version of New Comer. I am moving into the Hinata girls dorm as a another apartment Landlord Keitaro is still there for all you people who want to see him get the shit beat out of him. I took someone's idea. You probably know him but I am going to make it better than his. This is set basically set in a different saga of Love Hina, My Saga to be precise. Also my favorite character is Motoko-Chan not Naru-San.Also all your favorite characters will be in it. Including Seta, Sarah, Tama-Chan, Mutsumi, & maybe an appearance from Nayome in later Chapters. I will get hurt a lot ok, but not as much as Keitaro. This fic will be from my point of view, a.k.a First Person view. I hope yall like it. My name is Jason btw.
[To start off I am just wondering around The Hinata Hot Springs. Looking for a job & a place to stay. But no one will hire me so I wonder up some stairs, & find a hotel I knock on the door & a beautiful young girl answers the door.]
???-Yes? May I help you?
[I am over whelmed by her beauty that I can't get a word out so I calm down, & stop from staring at her.]
Me-Hi umm my name is Jake. Umm yeah I was wondering if I could tryout for a job here at this hotel.
???-This isn't a hotel.
Me: It isn't?
[She points to a sign that says All Girls Dorm.]
???-See it's a Girl's dorm not a Hotel.
Me-Aww Shit! Well I can't find a job anywhere here.
[I see a man in the dorm being chased by a girl with a sword.]
Me-umm if this is an all girls dorm why is there a man there?
???-Oh him he the landlord here. He is an exception.
Me-Well I could I be the landlord along with him?
???-Im not sure about it.
Me-Please Miss
[I get down on my hands & knee's & starts begging her. To let me be a landlord at the dorm.]
Me-I need a place to stay look I will pay rent if I have too just please let me stay here. I'll work really hard.
???-Hmmm alright since you begged just get off the ground.
Me-Thank You! [Bow] Yay! [Stands back up.]
???-Hey Keitaro!
Keitaro-Yeah Naru what is it?
Naru-You & this man here will both me landlords here at the dorm so let's show him around, & all that stuff.
Keitaro-Ok that's cool we could get the work done quicker.
Naru-Yeah since you barley doesn't do any work around here.
[I start laughing.]
Keitaro-What's so funny?
Me-You two are funny. Your like newly weds. Are you 2 married by any chance?
Naru-What me married to that dork?
Keitaro-Hey that's mean! By the way what is your name?
Me-Me? Im Jason I came here from America. Actually I was transferred here form America.
Naru-Wow America. Do you go to school here now?
Me-Yeah I go to Tokyo University ever heard of it?
Keitaro-WHAT!! You go to Tokyo U also?
Me-Yeah its kind of funny how I got in I made it in on the first try of the real exam. I don't know how but I got enough points right to get into Tokyo U.
Keitaro-Ha well I slept threw most of the test then when I woke up I sped through the rest of the test. So I ran away & thought I failed.
Naru-Yeah I cant believe he made it in this dork of all people he was a 4th year Ronin.
[Naru hits Keitaro in the head.]
Keitaro-Oww that hurt Naru.
Me-I thank that was the point umm may I come in its getting hot out here.
Naru-Oh sure come on in.
Me-Thank You.
[I step in through the front door, & 5 girls & a flying turtle fill the room.]
Girl#1-Naru who is that man & why is he here?
Girl#2-Oh Naru are you his girlfriend? You little sneak trying to keep it from us.
Naru-What?! Kitsune he is not my boyfriend!
Kitsune-Oh then you don't mind if I have him do you?
Me-Umm you don't even know me. Let alone how old I am.
Kitsune-It doesn't matter.
Girl#3-Ummm Sempai who is that man?
Keitaro-Oh Shinobu this is Jason he is going to be a landlord here with me.
Shinobu-Oh he is?
[I stick my right hand out to Shinobu to shake hands. She just sits there looking at me strangely.]
Me-Umm is anything wrong?
Shinobu-No it's just I never shaken hands before with someone.
Me-Oh im sorry I transferred here from America. Your ways must be different.
[I take my hand back I put it in my right pocket.]
Girld#4-America wow im Sarah I am just staying with these people because my dad left me here so they have to take care of me.
Me-Oh they do must be trouble.
Girl#5-She no trouble at all.
[I look up & see a girl jumping at me & she kicks me in the face. I fly back & hit the wall.]
Sarah-Su he is new here your not supposed to kick him.
Su-But I kick Keitaro all the time. See? Watch?
[Su jumps at Keitaro & kicks him in the face & he fly's into a different wall I did.]
Su-See?
Sarah-But Su Keitaro is immortal. Jason isn't.
[I recover from the kick into the wall.]
Me-Oww she sure is strong isn't she?
Sarah- Yeah she is.
[Another girl enters the room.]
Girl#6-Oh my what was that noise?
Naru-Oh Mutsumi that was Su. She kicked Jason & Keitaro into the wall.
Mutsumi- Who is Jason?
Me-Me I am going to be a landlord here with Keitaro.
Mutsumi-Oh wow that's good for you.
Me-Thank you miss. Naru-You can just call her Mutsumi no need for saying "miss" or "ma'am" here just call everyone by their first names.
Me- Oh ok.
Keitaro-Yeah I called everyone by their first name when I started living here I didn't say miss or ma'am.
Naru-Yeah but you don't have any manners!
[Naru punches Keitaro through the sliding glass door.]
Me-Phew. Im glad that wasn't me.
Naru-Yeah but he is immortal.
Kitsune-Yeah whenever we do something to hurt him he is always fine not even a broken bone.
Me-Wow I would get a few broken bones from her.
Sarah-Yeah no kidding.
[I look over & see a samurai girl just leaning against the wall being silent with her eye's closed.]
Me-Hi im Jason what's yours?
Girl#1-Hmm another week male why does this always happen?
Me-Well I don't know the world is a messed up place.
Girl#1-You are right about that. Well forgive my manners my name is Motoko Ayoma.
Me-Wow a cute name to go with a beautiful girl.
[Motoko blushes.]
Motoko- Don't call me beautiful or cute ok I am a warrior so now you must pay for what you have said.
[Motoko takes her sword out of her case & tries to slash me but I have a sword of my own a Sakabato. I move out of the way of her slash. She move's her sword over to hit me but I pull out my sword & block it.] Me-Heh wow you are good.
Motoko-Im better than you I was trained at the God's Cry School Dojo.
Me-God's cry school never heard of it but oh well I was trained in the Hiten Mitsurugi Ultra Super Sonic Sword Technique. Ya know like in Rurouni Kenshin?
Motoko-Really? I will still win this.
Me-Oh you sure about that?
[I move out of the way & hit her in the back with my sword.]
Me-You so sure now? Your mind was too busy to think of my next move so I saw an opening of attack & took it.
Motoko-Ow [She feels around on her back for a wound but nothings there.] What you didn't slash me?
Me-No I used the blunt side of my sword to hit you.
Motoko-I will win the next fight after I train for a while.
Me-Good ill be waiting pretty girl.
Motoko-Grrrrrr
[Motoko leaves the room & I put my sword away.]
Shinobu-Wow that was awesome.
Keitaro- Yeah you are the second person I have seen that beat Motoko.
Me-Oh really who was the first?
Naru-It was Seta.
Sarah-Yeah my papa.
Me-Wow this guy Seta must be good I might need to challenge him sometime.
Kitsune-Cool I would pay to see that show.
Me-I got a question who or what is that turtle? Naru-Oh that's Tama-Chan she is a hot springs turtle she can fly also.
Me-Oh that explains a lot.
Su-Yeah I think we should eat her Turtle Stu mmmmmm.
Tama-Chan-Myuh
[Tama-Chan flies away & Su chases after Tama.]
Shinobu-Su stop trying to eat Tama-Chan!
[Shinobu chases after Su.]
Me-Umm ok if you don't mind me asking what is Su's religion?
Naru-We really don't know.
Keitaro-Yeah we don't really ask because we know it's none of our business.
Me-Yeah & what's with Motoko? Does she not like losing to males?
Keitaro-She doesn't like males because of her past of her sister I guess.
Me-Oh is that so?
Keitaro-Yeah so my advice would be to stay away from her as much as possible.
Me-Heh I'll think about that but I am tired im going to bed, im so tired.
Naru-Yeah well it is late so I'll see all of you tomorrow morning.
Me-Yeah. [To Keitaro] Heh looks like we will be sharing a room & duties as a landlord.
Keitaro-Yeah.
Me-Im going to bed ok well since I don't have a bed I'll sleep on a couch g'night.
Keitaro-good night.
[Keitaro goes to his room & I fall asleep on the couch.]
End of Chapter 1.