Hi I have been thinking about writing this for awhile and I finally am even though I have not seen Wicked yet, this is my first Wicked story and I would like some helpful criticism
I only own the story and any characters that I make
On The Run
"NO! I WILL NOT HELP YOU, YOU TULLEL MINDED FIEND!" I shouted, it had been two months since I had arrived in Oz and only one month that they publicly announced The Wicked Witch of The West. I have powers, that is how the "Wizard" had found out about me, but what he doesn't know is that I can see through all of the lies that he had been telling and the fact that Morrible (Who is very horrible) is manipulating him like a puppet.
I had gotten a letter in the mail at my house that said that I needed to see the Wizard in the Emerald City and if I refused the Gale Force would be knocking on my door if I wasn't there by a certain date. I couldn't believe it, they expected me to drop everything and leave my home, when I have a steady job at the Ozway theaters which are all over the place, but how they found me I will never know.
When I got to the palace I didn't have to wait too long; when I got there he told me that Morrible would talk to me. She told me that I must join them or I would be another Wicked Witch
"Why should I help you?" I asked keeping a tuff persona up
"To get rid of that blasted girl Elphaba and the Animals" replied Morrible
That is when I started running away from Morrible, but that would prove to be a small mistake on my part, because Morrible froze me with her weather powers
"My, why don't you stay for awhile, you look a little cold" she laughed
But what she didn't know, was that one of my powers is to control fire, so my body temperature is warmer than most. I heated my body temperature and melted the ice in seconds then standing with my hands aflame
"Let me be, or I'll burn this place to the ground" I threatened with an angry look on my face and I think I sounded quite angry, because I was
Morrible looked at me with her jaw agape but then recovered
"I guess you are more powerful than I originally thought, but no matter I will find you" said my foe
I let out a small theatrical cackle (I have played good and evil characters so I knew how to be evil, or as she says wicked)
"You actually think that you can find me? Well you never will, because no matter how many men or spells you use I won't be there" I said with a grin that could easily label me as wicked alone
Morrible visibly looked scared and I took that as my chance to make a break for it yelling "NO! I WILL NOT HELP YOU, YOU TULLEL MINDED FIEND!" and I summoned one of the many cat suits that I had made for myself (I have them in different colors) it was a fiery orange with a big black stripe running from my right hand to my left leg, the glove on my right was orange and the left was black, the boots were also opposite colors. I used my powers to change into it and put on a black mask to cover my eyes, just in case
I stopped for a minute and I could hear Morrible telling the Ozians about me and I decided to make my first public appearance as the newest Witch in Oz
"She is wearing a…" said Morrible from the balcony until I interrupted
"An orange and black cat suit" I finished appearing on the balcony next to the palace after teleporting myself. I could hear several gasps; I had appeared before she had a chance to reveal who I truly am.
"Who are you?" I could hear people questioning
"I am The Flaming Rose" I said with a smirk, I had thought about this before, so I had given myself this name for if I had ever been made a Wicked Witch
"GARDS! GET HER!"Shouted Morrible
I jumped to the ground with the grace of a cat and looked up at Morrible just as the Gale Force started pouring out of the palace, and I could also see Glinda the Good watching me with a sad face
"Better wait a minute; ya better hold the phone, better mind your manner, better change your tone" I sang in a lower voice than my high pinched voice was used to, but I still pulled it off. I was also moving slowly, a little sexily, and menacingly
"Don't you threaten me girl; we're gonna do things my way, or we won't do things at all!" I sang and the vines on the palace around Morrible mainly that had flower buds on them started to react to my powers an let me control them and they opened up and started singing backup for me and annoying Morrible, perfect
"Ahhhh, Ahhhh, Ahhhhh, Ahhhh" the buds sang
"You don't know what you're messin' with. You got no idea. You don't know what you're lookin' at When you're lookin' here.
Ya don't know what you're up against, No, no way, no how. You don't know what you're messin' with, But I'm gonna tell you now!" I sang with a mischievous grin (me, buds, both)
"Get this straight! I'm just a mean green girl from out of Oz and I'm bad. (Mean girl bad) I'm just a mean green girl from out of Oz and it looks like you been had. I'm just a mean green girl from out of Oz, So get off my back, 'n get out my face, 'Cause I'm mean and Wicked And I am bad." I could see Morrible pulling out a small gun and she started to aim it at me, but I levitated and used the vines to get it out of her grip and put it in mine. The next lines were sung with me shooting the gun close to Morrible, but not close enough to hurt her but she did move out of the way in a funny way
"Wanna save your skin girl? You wanna save your hide? You wanna see tomorrow? (Ha-Ha!) You better step aside. Better take a tip girl. Want some good advice? Ya better take it easy, 'Cause you're walkin' on thin ice." I shot 12 shots out of the six-shooter using my powers to reload it
"Ya don't know what you're dealin' with. No, you never did. Ya don't know what you're lookin' at, But that's tough titty, kid! The Lion don't sleep tonight, And if you pull his tail, he roars. Ya say, "That ain't fair?" Ya say, "That ain't nice?" Ya know what I say? "Bleep you" (" Ahhhh, Ahhhh, Ahhhhh, Ahhhh")I prefer not to swear so I just sang bleep
"Why did you sing bleep?" asked Morrible
"Because I don't like to swear" I replied
"Watch me now! I'm just a Wicked mean girl from out of Oz And I'm bad. I'm just a Wicked mean girl, a real disgrace, And you've got me violent and mad. I'm just a Wicked mean girl from out of Oz, Gonna trash your butt! Gonna rock this place! I'm mean and green, And I am bad. Don't talk to me about old King-Kong. You think he's the worst? Well, you're thinkin' wrong. Don't talk to me about Frankenstein. He got a temper? (HA!) He ain't got mine.
You know I don't come from no black lagoon. I'm from past your world, beyond the clock. You can keep the thing, Keep the it, Keep the creature, they don't mean a thing!
I got Tiger style, major moves. I got the stuff, and I think that proves, You better move it out! Nature calls! You got the point? I'm gonna bust your bubble! (" Ahhhh, Ahhhh, Ahhhhh, Ahhhh")(by this point I turned into my half Tiger/part human but mostly tiger, but walks on two legs)
Here it comes! I'm just a Wicked mean girl from out of Oz And I'm bad. I'm just a Wicked mean girl from out of Oz A real hard case. You can't beat this trouble, man. I'm just a Wicked mean girl from out of Oz So just give it up. It's all over, ace. I'm Wicked and mean. (Wicked mean girl from out of Oz.) I'm Wicked and mean. (Wicked mean girl from out of Oz.) I'm Wicked and mean. (Wicked mean girl from out of Oz.) And I...am...bad!" I started levitating back up to the balcony that I had jumped down from
"Good bye Morrible!" I shouted and Disappeared in a puff of orange smoke
I could hear several people gasp and talk about my performance highly, the Ozians obviously liked me for my humor and it would be a lot harder for Morrible to brainwash them out of liking me
I teleported myself away from the city and I climbed up a tree to rest for awhile because I just ran, changed clothes, cast several spells, turned into a Tiger and back, and teleported; but then I heard a voice that I would eventually come to know very well
"You really made Morrible mad and completely humiliated her Flamingrose" said an unknown voice
I looked down and saw The Wicked Witch of the West standing under the tree, I wasn't scared, because we are now on the same side of the law
"Ah, so you saw" I said climbing down from the tree
"Yes, and I must say that it was quite humorous" said the Witch of the West
"Thank you, by the way you can call me Katie" I said
"Ok Katie, do you need somewhere to stay? I also think that if we work together we could stop that Animal hater Morrible. Oh and you can call me Elphaba" said Elphaba
"You've found yourself a partner in crime" I said with a smirk and held out my hand
"Pleasure to do business with you Flaimingrose" said Elphaba with a smirk
"and I with you Wicked Witch of the West" I said still smirking