A/N: After reading My Immortal, its crudeness inspired me to rewrite it in a much more bearable manner. I haven't changed any of the characters, hence Ebony's Mary-Sue qualities. Hope you enjoy!
P.S: May as well state now that I didn't write any of My Immortal, I don't own any of the ideas or plots (thank god).
Hi, my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way. If you're wondering what I look like.. Well, I have waist-length ebony hair (the color for which I was named), that has violet streaks and red tips. My eyes are ice blue, comparable to limpid tears, and a lot of people compare me to Amy Lee. I'm a vampire, but my teeth are straight and white, since I lack fangs, and naturally, I have very pale skin. I also happen to be a witch, and I attend Hogwarts magic school in England, where I'm in seventh year. I'm 17 years old, and a goth (if you couldn't tell already).
I wear mostly black clothing, and love to shop at Hot Topic (I get all of my clothes there, actually). For example, today I was wearing a black corset, with matching lace on it, a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets, and black combat boots. My gothic appearance extends to my makeup as well. I usually wear white foundation, black lipstick, eyeliner, and red eyeshadow.
I was walking outside Hogwarts today. It was raining, with snow mixed in, which made the sun disappear. That made me happy. A lot of the preps were staring at me, so I flipped up my middle finger at them to salute them as I walked by. I can't stand them.
"Hey Ebony!" A voice called. I looked up, and it was Draco Malfoy!
"What's up, Draco?" I asked.
"Nothing..." He said shyly. He went to continue the conversation, but I heard my friends calling me. Smiling apologetically, I turned and headed to them.