Hiya guys, this ones a poem by Lucy. Please read and review even if it isn't a story it means a lot to me. I might make this a series of poems about Harry Potter depending on How it goes. Please leave constructive criticism, I really appreciate it! Hope you enjoy!
Some whispered of betrayal,
Others empathized with loss,
But the Grim just turned its tail
And on his shaggy legs ran at all costs.
The wind twisted in the air,
Whistling, writhing, whipping and blinding.
The biting cobbles of the traitors lair
Cut his paws causing terrible bleeding.
A rat scurried to join the dog,
Sneaking in hope to escape its ends
Whirling around in the impenetrable fog.
The duel began between ancient friends.
Anger swirled through his veins,
Misery clouded his every thought,
As the protagonist's fight continued in vain,
The cunning rat slipped away uncaught,
The Traitor's plan was steadily built,
Through the victim's own expense and temper,
The supposed villain was deemed guilty,
And signed up for a life facing the terrible demeantors.
That's the story as it's told in the present,
How the four troubles makers,
Were suddenly broken and bent.
At the betrayal of the Rat,
And the misery of the Dog.
That was the day the Moon disappeared…
When the Stag was killed in the impenetrable fog.
So that was it. I really enjoy writing poetry so will probably post more. What do you guys think? Hope you liked it. Please read and review. It's always appreciated.
BYE! Lucy ;)