Hello, I am new to the whole writing thing so please tell what you think of it.
--Super-amazing-line break-of-awesomeness-
I stood in front of big glass doors as I closed my eyes and prepared myself to go into a high school that I would be living in for the next four years. I opened my eyes and pushed open the doors to see a giant sign that said "Welcome to Warriors High". I stared in awe of how big the school looked on the inside. To my left there were trophy cases and to my right there were pictures of twelfth graders from every single year. I walked around the huge entrance until I saw a office that was labeled help desk. As I walked in I saw a lady with a name tag that said . She suddenly noticed me and asked "Hello, Are you here to get your information?". "Yes," I answered before I handed her my profile. "Hmm let's see… Name Hollyleaf, team Thunder, and gender female," she said out loud before handing me my room keys, schedule, and information booklet. I looked at my room number then began to walk to the girls building. Apparently I had everything to know about my time here besides who my roommate was going to be.
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As I opened up the door I saw a few girls I didn't know that well standing around talking about something so I decided to ignore them. I went into the elevator and waited impatiently for what seemed to be forever until it finally reached my floor. I grabbed my heavy luggage and looked around the hallway until I saw room 117 T. I dragged all of my stuff there, and then I slowly opened the door to see my best friend Cinderheart. "Cindy it's me! Hollyleaf!" I exclaimed joyfully. I haven't seen her since eighth grade. "Holly? You are my roommate?! I can't believe it! We got so lucky this year," Cinderheart said in disbelief. We then hugged and compared schedules.
Cinderheart's schedule
Hour 1: Algebra ll
Hour 2: Advance Biology
Hour 3: Literature
Hour 4: Lunch
Hour 5: Break
Hour 6: World History
Hour 7: German
Hour 8: Dinner
Hour 9: Optional Study Hall
Hollyleaf's schedule
Hour 1: Algebra ll
Hour 2: Advance biology
Hour 3:Advance World History
Hour 4: Lunch
Hour 5: Break
Hour 6: Advance Literature
Hour 7: German
Hour 8: Dinner
Hour 9: Optional Study Hall
As Cinderheart read my schedule she had a shocked expression. "I knew you wanted to have advanced classes but this many?" she said. "I want to have as many options as possible!" I argued. "I know, but… Can you really handle all the stress?" Cinderheart asked quietly. That shut me up but before I could point out that I could I felt my phone hum. I took out my phone and read the text from Ivypool
Hey are you free? Dovewing is being annoying again and I have extra tickets to the movies. Ask Cindheart if she wants to come too.
I looked up from my phone and asked Cinderheart if she wanted to come to the movies with me and Ivypool. "Sure, I wasn't planning anything today".
Ok, Cindy's coming too. Meet us at the entrance of Warriors High.
We quickly got dressed then went to the entrance of Warriors High to wait for her.
Ivypool's P.O.V.
I quickly got dressed in my skull leggings, people talk about me behind my back and I just sit here like "Damn, I got myself a fan club," shirt, and combat boots. These items made up most of my wardrobe and I was ok with that. My twin Dove, said that is sent out a message that said I have bad taste in clothes. Of course right after she said that I said it actually sent out a message that said I can totally kick your ass. I stepped out of the bathroom and looked around cautiously making sure Dovewing wasn't there. She wasn't so I peaked my head out into the hallway. Nobody was there so I tipped toed towards the elevator making sure my combat boots didn't jingle. When I turned the corner and there she was talking with some other Thunder girls.
How was that? Was it good? I hope you guys will like it.