Hey guys this is my fanfiction I beg you please write a review otherwise ill think nobody has read it or liked it even if u don't like it plz review id appreciate it

Hey guys this is my fanfiction I beg you please write a review otherwise ill think nobody has read it or liked it even if u don't like it plz review id appreciate it.

PROLOGUE

"Link, I……" Midna began. "see you later," she had
said, gently pushing her tear toward the mirror. Link stood transfixed at her,
wondering what she had meant to say. He heard the mirror crack and saw it
beginning to stress. He wanted to scream; to stop her, but he couldn't. He
was too shocked. He started at Midna. He just couldn't accept it. After all,
he loved her!
Midna was transported back into the Twilight Realm just as the mirror broke
into many shards. Link stood there shocked for a while. Finally, Zelda spoke.
"Shshes gone"
"Why?" asked Link. Zelda was shocked. It didn't seem like Link to
speak. Then, she realized, of course he had to speak at some point.
"What?" asked Zelda.
"Why did she break the mirror?" asked Link, still frozen at the spot
where the mirror broke. Then came a startling outburst. "WHY!?"
"Because," Zelda said gently. "She did it to protect Hryule. She feared
another incident like this would happen."
"She did it because of….Hyrule?" asked Link.
"Yes." said Zelda.
Link said nothing for a long time. Finally...
"Would you like to be escorted back?""Sure."CHAPTER ONE
It had been 2 years later. Midna was in the Twilight Realm thinking about her
life, as she had no duties to be fulfilled at the moment. If you had walked in
on her, you would not notice any difference in age. She kept her hair in the
same style, she still wore the same clothes, and she hadn't grown an inch as
she was so tall. She was thinking of Link. She remembered how a week after
smashing the mirror, she had tried to think of a way back into the world of
light. She had failed at this and tried to rebuild her kingdom, which Zant
left a mark on. She was depressed at times like this. She didn't like
thinking of Link; it made her think of how she lost him. It made her think of
how she loved him. Occasionally, she would try to find ways back into the
world of light, and sometimes she regretted breaking the mirror. She knew she
had to do it. She had to be sure Hyrule was safe…….
"Princess Midna!" yelled a voice. Midna broke out of her trance and
looked around. Three twili were standing before her.
"What is it?" Midna asked.
"Someone has broken out of prison," said one twili. Midna had built a
prison to be sure that nobody like Zant came to be. She was fair to people,
and would make absolutely sure they were guilty before locking them up.
"Who!?" said Midna.
"Dorcuro," Said another twili in answer.
"Put up wanted posters now!!" she yelled. "Unless you know his location
already?"
"I'm afraid we don't know," responded the third twili.
"Send search parties if you must," said Midna. Dorcuro was one of the
twili that thought Zant ways were best and he tried to lead a rebellion.
However, Midna was too strong for him.
"Don't bother looking for me," Dorcuro said from the shadows. "Midna
I did not escape to lead another rebellion. I wanted to make a deal"
"Well what is it?" spat Midna "I doubt it will make much
difference."
"Are you sure?" said Dorcuro slyly. "Not even if I could bring you back
to the world of light?" Midna stood frozen.
"Whwhat?!" she said in disbelief
"Zant was able to travel back and forth without the mirror, as you know. He
taught me how."
"And in return?" asked Midna.
"Ahh yes. In return, I ask for my freedom," At first Midna was thinking
of saying yes immediately, but then she realized this could be trouble for her
people.
"Sorry but I can't release you," she stated, although she knew that
Dorcuro would not take 'no' for an answer.
"A
"Wait," she said, halfheartedly."Hm?""What if I made a decree to
tell the prison guards to treat you with respect? You know, give you better
meals and allow you to have some entertainment? But, I'm afraid I'd have to
keep you locked up for the safety of my people."
"Hm... Well, it's the best deal I'll get, so sure. Now, when do you want
to head to the world of light?" Dorcuro asked, false concern filling his
voice.
"Right now," Midna stated, eager to see Link again.
"Very well. Tell your guards to leave," Dorcuro instructed. Midna's eyes
widened.
"WHAT!? Why do you need them to leave?" she demanded, anger and distrust
replacing desperation and sadness.
"Concentration," Dorcuro simply said, in a matter of fact tone.
"Anyway, we both know as the twilight princess, you're stronger than I."
"Hmm..." Midna figured he had a point. She really wanted to go badly.
"Fine," she said, and motioned to her guards, to leave. "Guards,
leave." The guards hesitated, but left.
"Midna, let me see your dominant hand," Dorcuro said.
"I know Zelda helped you with your injury by giving you her triforce power
during you adventure with Link. I read your book about it. Anyway if this is
true, you have a fragment of the goddess' magic left in you... IF you are
still connected to the triforce of wisdom, and it really was the goddesses
that made the mirror in the first place."
"So Zant did this by using Ganondorf's power?" she asked, interest
building up inside her, along with her eagerness to see the world of Light
again.
"Yes," Dorcuro said. Midna did as instructed, being careful all the same.
Soon, her hand lit up, and a symbol appeared. It was the triforce symbol. A
portal then appeared.
"IT'S WORKING!!" Midna shouted with glee "Oh, and of course." Midna
wrote a decree for Dorcuro, stating his new treatment and put her signature on
it. "There you go. Give that to the guards, and you're life should be
easier."
"Heh... Thanks, princess Midna," Dorcuro said, holding back a snicker.
Midna stepped into the portal. She was starting to enter the world of light
when: "Oh and here's my thanks." Dorcuro laughed, and snapped. In that
split second, Midna was an imp again.

Give a big thanks to scorp316 for the new grammer otherwise it would plain suck, he hasn't don e the entire story though, he is working on it