I've been brainstorming on a new fanfiction recently, and I hope you like it, and yeah! Please leave a comment if you like and please like it, favorite, share it! And just to notify you, I'm listening to Lindsey Stirling while writing this, and if you don't know who Lindsey Stirling is, go to youtube now, and search Shatter Me Lindsey Stirling feat. Lzzy Hale! Okay, well bye!
Prologue
Tris' POV
I grab a her hand and look down. She looks up to meet my eyes, "Mommy? What are we doing?" Grace asks, her blue eyes showing her confusion. "We're shopping for school. It'll be just you and me." I smile down to her, and she smiles back. "Where is Daddy and Andrew?" Tobias is helping Andrew with his back to school shopping. "They're having some boy time." She nods, and continues to hold my hand.
"Is Auntie Christina out with Marie?" Her blond bangs blows into her face, her long braid smacking into her cheek. She pulls her hair out of her mouth and gags. I laugh, "Yes, sweetie, we might even see them." She skips along the concrete, and stops at the rails of the chasm. "Whoa," Her eyes are almost bulging out of her head, her black dress flows in the wind. She does this every time, and it's like seeing her and Andrew for the first time again.
Once we finish shopping, Andrew and Tobias meet us at the pit. Grace runs along, waving to everyone, and them waving back. "Andy!" She shouts and sprints to her brother. I love how the get along, Marlene's and Uriah's kids basically fight the purity war all over again in less than an hour. Tobias walks over to me and grasps my hand. "How did it go?" He whispers in my ear, moving my hair behind my ear. "Good, we ran into Chris and Marie, and with them being "besties" and all Grace and Marie were talking for at least an hour while Chris and I picked out they're clothes. Surprisingly, we had enough time to stop by the tattoo place and say hi to Tori." I answer, still watching Grace and Andrew. Tobias let's go of my hand and nods. "Great, let's go home now." He says, and I laugh for no reason.
10 years later
Grace's POV
"Come on, Marie!" I shout from the train, she smiles as if she was just playing around. She sprints and pulls herself into the train. I see my Mom waving to Andrew and I as we pass her. "Good luck!" She yells, but I could barely hear her, the wind roaring as the train passes. Andrew and Cody walk towards me. "How's my little sis?" Andrew smirks, "You're only five minutes older!" I grin, I love it when we tease each other. "Hard to believe we're twins, huh. A whole FIVE minutes difference!" He turns to Cody, who is bursting into laughter. Then I turn around, eyes open and sprint to the other side of the train car. "Hannah!" I poke my head out and see the eleven-year-old clinging on to the railing. "What!? Can a girl just have some fun!" I pull her by her arm inside the train car.
"You know that scares Mom and Dad half to death!"
"So, you know they used to do this too."
"No, they didn't! What you're doing is a death wish!"
"No it isn't!"
I breathe heavily, then run my fingers through my hair. Then I smirk, "I bet Jai Pedrad would cry if you died." Hannah blushes, it's old news that she has a crush on Zeke and Shauna's third child, Jai. "There he is now!" I whisper-shout at her, and give her a little push in the right direction. I just love punishing her by making her talk to Jai, which she confessed that she liked to Mom, which was a huge mistake because she always get's Dad and then tells Aunt Christina, and you can imagine where that leads. Thank goodness Issac, is only seven, and doesn't have to deal with this stuff.
Whenever we reach school, I jump off the train and sprint it off, the thing I love about Dauntless, is the care-free lifestyle. Well, technically not care-free because Dad wants us to keep our grades up. The only thing worrying me today is the aptitude test. But on the bright side, my grandmother volunteered to administer the test. I think I belong in Dauntless, and I also have so many friends here. I don't really care what the test says, I know where I belong.
In the hallway, an Erudite boy knocks into a short, abnegation girl and calls her a "Stiff". "Hey!" I yell at him, and he immediately turns. "What the hell was that all was that all about!" I don't care about the strange look that everyone is giving me, I help the girl up. "Are you okay?" I ask her, she shakes her head and I lead her to the nearest restroom. Her hair falls out of the abnegation bun, showing long, jet black hair. "Want me to redo your hair?" I ask in a kind tone. She sniffles, and nods. Marie bursts in and rushes over to help. "I punched the guy in the nose." She informs us, as I twist the girl's hair into the plain bun. "All done." I try to reassure her with a smile, but I couldn't. "I'm Raina." She bows her head, my mother told me this was an abnegation greeting, and I bow back. "Well, we should go to class, nice to meet you Raina!" I shout as I run to my locker to get my books, and head to class.
Andrew's POV
I look for a Grace, sitting at the Dauntless table and sit next to her as we wait for our name to be called for the aptitude test. We talk about things, but mostly we twiddle our thumbs. "Andrew Eaton, Cody Pedrad, Raina Lockehart, Cecilia Thompson," The man reads the names and we start heading into the rooms that are only used for the aptitude tests. "Hello, Andrew!" My grandmother smiles and pulls me into an embrace. "It's so good to see you! How's your mother?" Her eyes light up, "She's good, we're all good." I answer her, trying to hide how nervous I am. "Well, I suppose we should start the aptitude test." She says. I nod, I can't speak. She hands me a clear liquid, and I sip it down fast.
A woman's voice, I hear her say, "Choose." Before me, they're is a knife and cheese. I choose none.
Grace's POV
I see Andrew walk out first, his face as pale as snow. It looks like he'd just seen a ghost. The man comes back and calls names up. Cody and Marie left, so I speak to my other friend Leo, Yasmine, and Nathan. We laugh and talk, while Andrew just sits there.
I feel like my name will never be called, there is less than three people in the room, counting me. "Grace Eaton, Madison Prior, and Henry Solis." I turn to the other girl in the room, Prior is my Mom's maiden name. We separate into the rooms, and I see a tall, abnegation man. He looks like my Dad, and suddenly, I'm really scared. When Andrew and I were fourteen, my Dad told us about his childhood of abuse and beatings from his Father while he was growing up. And he must know that my last name is Eaton, I hope he doesn't. And the bad thing is, I look a lot like my dad, I have his eyes and nose, also his hair color. Why couldn't I get Grandma! "Hello, I am Marcus, and I'll be administrating your aptitude test." He says, as he holds a clear liquid in front of me. I grab the liquid from him, being wary of anything he does. I sip it slowly, then the room goes black.
"Choose." I hear a woman's voice say. I turn around, but yet, I don't see anything. Andrew told me there should be a knife and cheese. The only thing he said after his test. I panic, and suddenly I'm back in the room with Marcus. "What happened?" I ask, trying my best to not hyperventilate. "I don't know. You were under the simulation, but it just shut down." He says, scratching the back of his neck. "Can I try again? I need an aptitude." I try my best not to cry, and it's getting really hard. "I'm sorry, but I'm don't have anymore." He looks me in the eyes, and I wish looks could hurt someone. "Goodbye, Grace Eaton. I know who you are."
Sorry this chapter was short, and please don't hate me for the cliffhanger!