ello! this is kirakora here! and this is my first fanfic ever! *squeals in delight* anyway, don't judge if its horrible or anything.
The kit was surrounded by blackness. "Smokekit open your eyes,don't you want to go outside and explore?" she heard someone say. she moaned, she didn't want to open her eyes. that would mean leaving the warm body she snuggled write next to.
"oh come on! its sooo boring in here!dont you want to be a warrior?instead of a kit cooped up inside a den?" questioned another voice. it was slightly lower than the one before.warrior,that's what i want to be when i grow up! she slowly opened her and looked around.
"night kit, don't be so hard on smokek-" she looked over at smokekit "you opened your eyes!" She was a she cat, with sliver tabby stripes. her eyes were a bright green color. and her paws and tail were white. the curled up on her like a blizzard. "im snowstorm,your mother. and this is-" she started to greet us all.
"silver kit. im your brother." said a silver cat with darker grey stripes and grey blue eyes.
"im night kit. i am also your brother." said a black kit his back was covored in white dots it had grey blue eyes like silver kit. he didnt look much like mother.
"you guys can go outside, just stay together and don't go poking your noses were you aren't supposed to."she said. and with that, we went outside into the world.
so... is this horrible? too short extra extra? give me review plz!