Hihi this is my first story on fanfiction...positive criticism is welcomed :) let's go on a journey you guys
WELCOME TO JAR OF HEARTS
BPOV
It's just a simple town to town move nothing big I'll be there in four hours tops…boy was I wrong! Maybe if it was just little ol' me I would have been there on time; but there was no way I was leaving my son (yes I said SON) with those nut jobs I call my parents; don't get me wrong I love all my parents and by 'all' I mean my dad, Charlie and his wife sue and my mom Renée and her husband Phil, they are all fantastic during the day time but as soon as the sun went down and the crickets begin to sing their tune, my parents would practice their very active EHEM! Sex life I mentally cringe every time I think about their first years of remarriage. My mom she was very um….eccentric, who am I kidding the woman was border lining crazy well not straight up cuckoo's nest crazy; I'm talking no filter connected from brain to mouth, spontaneous, electric and all that crazy fun stuff; she was even more so when it comes to sex, I remember when I was 16 and she told me about the birds and the bees…..
"Bella honey, can I talk to you for a sec? Renée said peeking her head into my bedroom.
"Sure mom, what's up?" I replied shifting to place my feet under my body.
"Well I'm here to talk to you about sex" she started. Now me being the shy girl that I was, my eyes were as wide as saucers."I know that this period in your life is a difficult one, especially when it comes to sex: all the hormones coursing through your veins, your heart, she's saying one thing, your body's saying another and your brain...let's face it, he packed his belongings and went on a cruise. Now honey I'm not asking you to wait till marriage, I certainly didn't also, asking for that would be like asking a goldfish not to swim, all I'm asking is that you are careful as to whom you choose to deflower you".
At this point my eyes were bulging out of their sockets "also honey I beg of you, please PLEASE use protection, the last thing you need is an STD, oh! I almost forgot, studded condoms are the best" her face broke out into a huge cheesy grin, I instantly knew what was coming "oh the things Phil can do with a studded condom" she sighed with a nostalgic look on her face, "dinner will be ready in about a hour" she said patting my thigh before prancing out the room like she was off to see the fucking wizard.
That was the single most traumatic day of my teenage life...of course back then i had no idea what real trauma was.
"Mom! I need to go to the restroom" Nate screeched from his car seat.
"But you went 10 minutes ago" I whined.
"But I didn't need to pee 10 minutes ago" he said jutting out his lower lip, I was about to scold him but he quivered is lip once and I was sold. "Mom I'm sorry but I do not plan out my peeing time, when I gotta go, i got to go now can I go pleasssssssse?"
"Fine" I huffed
This kid is making me as soft as silly putty
I hopped out the car and freed him from his seat; I walked him onto the sand and stood in front of him waiting for him to get on with it.
"Well…" I said trying to hurry him up, I was running late as it was.
"I can't go with you looking at my junk mom" he said matter-of-factly.
I sighed and turned around.
I have created a six year old smartass
Buzz!
I pulled my phone out my pocket; the caller's ID flashed Jake
"Hey jay what's up" I asked smiling to myself.
"Where the hell are you bells?" Jake yelled.
"Well, hello to you too Mr. Black and how are you this fine afternoon? I'm good thank you for asking" Jake huffed and I giggled.
"Hello Bella, I'm fine, your good so I'm good now where are you?" he rushed out in one breath.
"Chill, Uncle Jake we're about 45 minutes away from our new house, had to pull over for Nate to pee" I stressed.
"I'm done mom" Nate screamed making a mad dash for the car.
"NATHAN ELIJAH SWAN! What have I told you about running close to traffic" he skidded to a halt at the sound of my voice, he turned around with his head lowered to his shuffling feet.
"What did I say?" I coaxed
"Don't run near traffic unless you want to die" he recited.
"Good. I'll meet you at the house Jake, come here Nathan let's go" I grabbed his chubby little arm and led him to the car.
EPOV
"But I love you baby! Please don't leave me" she begged.
OH MY FUCKING GOD! What have I gotten myself into?
"Edward please…tell me you feel this connection"
Oh god! I rolled my eyes, is this girl shitting me, I've known her for one day; I don't even REALLY know her! Hell the only bloody connection I got was my dick to her pussy, and babe it was not that good of a connection. What is this world coming to…you fuck a girl once and she's already paying for burial plots and saying shit like "let's run away and make this love last forever" it's like a bad mtv screening. I should probably say something but what's her name again Tami...Toni…Tanya…TANYA! Yea that's it
"Tanya, listen, you're a great, great girl, and really you are" I said as convincingly as I could muster up. "It's me ,not you" in any other instance I would be bending over backwards in hysterics at this lame and immensely over used phrase but right now I wanted to cry like a new born getting it's ass popped.
"I'm not ready for this kind of commitment" I pointed between us "but it was fun and I really enjoyed myself, I truly am sorry"
I need to get the hell out of here.
"But baby I can make it all better just let me" she wined fingering the buttons of my shirt
I wonder what mom is cooking.
"Whoa there Toni" I shouted when I felt a hand at my belt.
"It's Tanya"
"Yea that, I'm gonna go" I literally sprinted out of that apartment as fast as my legs allowed I could hear her stamping and cursing me. Sheesh women were so damn predicable. I know I was good, hell I'm the best she probably had , but honestly just cause I hit it good with you does not mean I wanna marry you . Bloody hell woman! Marriage…HA... as if. One pussy a day was not for me .And Kids, ha fat chance, the little shit-lets, did not exist in my fucking prefect world.
With a sigh, I climbed into my car, Sophia, the only woman I will ever love, and took a deep breath. I was horny that was sure, and that bitch up stairs was way out of the picture. If I go up there for seconds she'll probably think it's a damn proposal. Nah, this big boy (and I mean big boy) has got better, and tighter, fish to fry.
I rolled the roof of my car down, inhaled the clean air, flicked on the radio, shoved on my sunglasses, started my engine and said " Ah well, its on to the next one." thinking of the nice juicy blonde I could easily pick up at the down town bar, so what if it was 2 in the afternoon, she would be there and with a click of my finger she would be in my bed. Yep life was good ... real fucking good.
Soooooooooo what do you think (crossing my fingers) was it good? First Story first chapter any good advice you guys?