A/N: Hey! This is my first fanfic! Criticize me in whatever ways you want, as long as it doesn't insult me or the plot of my story.
"Normalish talking"
"Normalish thinking"
"Demonic talking"
"Demonic thinking"
Normal narration
me! the author explaining something
the betaer, if he has anything to explain
(A/N: me saying something irrelevant)
(B/N: betaer saying something irrelevant)
Enjoy!
disclaimer: I don't own naruto. (author starts crying)
[Three hours before sunset, October 10th , 5 years after the Kyuubi attack]
"Time to die, Demon Brat!"
"Go back to Hell!"
"Time to pay for what you've done to us!" were the collective shouts of the villagers as they were beating the so-called 'Demon Brat of Konoha' within an inch of his life.
This is a good time for me, the author, and god of this realm that we call a FanFiction, to describe the life of Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze, the 'Demon Brat'.
On October 10th, five years ago, a being known as the Kyuubi attacked Konohagakure no Sato (the Village Hidden in the Leaves) for reasons unknown. This is also the day that Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze was born to Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime Hokage, one of the best seal masters in the Elemental Nations, and his wife Kushina Uzumaki, Konoha's Red Death and the last of the Uzumaki clan.
Kushina, sadly, died in childbirth, and Minato used the Shiki Fuin to summon the shinigami, at the price of his own soul, in order to seal the Kyuubi into his own son. Naruto, who was only a few hours old, was sent to the orphanage. Hiruzen Sarutobi, was forced back into office.
Naruto was beaten by the villagers even before he could walk, because they thought that he was the Kyuubi incarnate. He was denied a home, decent clothes(this is why he wears the 'kill me' orange), and edible food. He was forced to live on scraps since age four. He has been abused in some way, shape, or form since the day that word got out that he was the jinchuriki of the Kyuubi. The wors of which were on the anniversary of the attack, his birthday, which leads us to now.
(A/N: I will interrupt the story like this as a narrator-like person to explain things for people who haven't read the cannon. If I get any names or events wrong, please tell me. Now, back to the story!)
There was a pulse, and Naruto was suddenly shrouded in red chakra. It warped and twisted, eventually taking the shape of a fox with a single tail.
Chakra is a mixture of physical and spiritual energy that is manipulated into the five main elements: fire, water, earth, lightning, and wind. There are sub-elements which are created by mixing two elements together, or three if a person is extremely talented. Some sub-elements are wood (water+earth), metal (earth+fire), something I call inferno(fire+wind), and ice (wind+water).
The last thing Naruto heard before he scummed to the bliss of unconsciousness was a villager screaming "the Demon has escaped! Kill it!"
[Unknown location, unknown time]
Naruto awoke in what seemed to be a sewer, with water (he hoped it was water) up to his mid-shin. He could hear a voice calling out to him, and felt the irresistible urge to walk down a specific tunnel.
When he found the source of the voice and the urge stopped, he saw a huge, bronze barred cage held shut by a piece of paper with the kanji for 'seal' on it.
"What are you doing here, kit" he heard a voice ask, which was demonic sounding, but sounded almost apathetic
"Kit? why is this thing calling me a kit? Only foxes call children kits." he thought while walking closer to the cage. "who are you and where the hell am I?" asked Naruto.
"Kit, this is your mindscape. And as for who I am... I think you know." the figure stepped out from the shadows and Naruto saw a giant fox with nine tails.
"The Kyuubi? Why are you in my mind?" Naruto asked.
"Kit, I am here because the fourth Hokage sealed me into you. I have seen how much pain you go through because of me, and if it helps any, I'm sorry. What those villagers put you through is something no one should EVER have to go through, and you managed to stay sane and not go genocidal. that requires more maturity than most adults have." said the King/Queen of the Demons (A/N: its gender will be decided on later. Hell, I think I might take a poll on it.), still seeming like he/she didn't care. This, somewhat surprisingly, made Naruto feel better if only because of the thought that there is someone who doesn't hate him besides the old man and the ramen chefs.
"Thank you. Is there something I can call you besides Kyuubi?"
"There is, but I haven't known you long enough to know I can trust you with it, so until further notice, just call me Kyuubi"
"That didn't help me at all, and it didn't even answer my question"
"Kit, you know I can hear your thoughts right? We have a link because of the seal, so if you don't want me to hear something do it without broadcasting it through the seal." after it finished saying that, Kyuubi burst into laughter at seeing Naruto's face. When it finished , it said, while still chuckling, "Kit, its time for you to wake up now. When you wake up, go see the Hokage and tell him everything that happened. Hell, he might even have a story for you."
Naruto felt a sharp tug in his chest, and the sight of his mindscape faded to black.
A/N:Ha! I finished the first chapter of my first fanfic! Review! Tell me what I did right and what I did wrong! I accept all forms of constructive criticism. this includes telling me I spelled a word wrong. If I do, tell me, and I'll change it (not that you will, my betaer is a human dictionary[yes, I know my betaer in real life]).
I have two polls up. One for Kyuubi being male or female and one for the pairing.
If you haven't noticed, I'm just a bit insane. like, Ghost Ookagiri (sp?) from "Yet Again With a Little Extra Help" by Third Fang (Third Fang is amazing. I will refer to his fic many times in mine. Each will be completely pointless and will have nothing to do with the plot) I suggest reading it.
Bye! Have fun not getting hit by exploding cows (author starts giggling insanely)
Hail the Log!
B/N:...goddamn it...where the hell is the duct tape when you need it?