Hey this is my first fanfic, so please go easy on the comments. New to this,I'm always open constructive criticism.
I don't own PJO or any of its characters, Rick Riordan does.
Chapter 1
I'm on Half-Blood Hill tears falling off my face, I hate that bitch. Who am I you may ask, I'm Percy Jackson, the son of Poseidon, Hero of Olympus, Bane of Kronos, Titans, Giants, and Gaia. Why is the Hero of Olympus crying? Well it all started when…
Flashback
I just came back early from my quest from Athena to gain her blessing to marry Annabeth after 3 months. Athena didn't let me contact Annabeth, or tell her what the quest was for. What was this quest? Nothing, just the Twelve Labors of Hercules. I was walking down the hill when I met Chiron on my way. "How did the quest for Athena go?""Good. Gotta go look for Annabeth. See ya""O-ok." I looked everywhere, but no Annabeth, maybe she's at the beach. I sprinted over there and saw my step brother, Kyle kissing some blonde, probably an Aphrodite girl. Kyle is another son of Poseidon, except the exact opposite of me, he is an egomaniac and a big jerk. He took all my friends except Nico and Thalia by blaming me for everything he did, like snitching on the Stolls, or burning Katie's garden. But when I heard the blonde speak my heart broke. "Oh Kyle, I love you more than I ever loved Percy.""Annabeth? I can't believe you would do this to me.""Percy! It's not what it looks like." I took out the ring I had Hephaestus made. "I can't believe I was gonna propose." I ran away ignoring Annabeth's calls. I packed my stuff, and left Camp Half-Blood.
So how'd I do? Some of the things in the story are from other fics, like Annabitch. Read and please do me a favor and keep reviews to minimum. Put a separate page for reviews, just minimize reviews please.