OnlyIcanRULEtheWORLDlikeIdo Here!
Okay, as you know if you have read Hikari before... My Hikari Story sucked. The plot was great, but I was a horrible writer. I'm still not Miss Top selling Author... In fact, I barely have any readers (may have something to do with the couples) , but my newer ones are better than Hikari and Melody of the Cards. Melody of the Cards probably won't be seeing the light of day anytime soon, but this story is going to get a complete makeover. I won't be using Kari's P.O.V anymore, and I will try to work more on the fluency. I'll post the chapters up again but I'll rewrite them all so they're better than they were. If you are new to my stories or never knew about my older stories and their awfullness, then you should probably check out "Melody of the Cards" and then compare it to ether "Looks Like the boy's to Shy" or "The Insomniac drabbles AliceXRuno" But if GirlXGirl isn't you cup of tea, I suggest to ether not review with anything nasty, or to not read those last two at all.
Anyway, If someone wants to see the older Hikari story and all of it's awfulness, PM me and ask for me to send it to you. But If horrible sentence fluency bothers you, ("A.K.A Using only short sentences or only Long sentences" for all the younger readers) I suggest you don't ask to see it.
I hope for people to review when I make this story better! Thanks a bunch for reading this message!