Maximum Ride Revision

by Icecream.socialist

The sequels sucked, and if you reread them, you may think so too. And personally I think it started sucking right around the end of Maximum Ride one That's why I'm writing what I think might be a better outcome for the story. Rated T through M.

1. Opening

Opening-

Ok, I don't think I really need to search a hour to find someone who agrees with me on this, but I really, really don't want to hear about how stupid I am for thinking that the sequels sucked, and shit like that- I just want to see how this goes, and I'm not going to think less of you because you disagree, I just want to do this. But if you disagree with me, I do suggest finding the differences of the first and the rest.

May I also point out that this is a tiny experiment, and I don't expect it to turn out amazing.

Let's see how this turns out.

~~IceCream Socialist