YAY!MY FIRST STORY! It was weird because I didn't know what to do. I'm not a tech person per-say. But I got it now!
Now this story is the first story I've ever written. I thought, "Hey, since my friends think it awesome maybe I should show it to everybody." And that's exactly what I'm doing.
And its summer vacation. This is the time to do it.
Now, in my story I have Naruto characters: Sakura, Hidan, and some other Akatsuki members. The only twist in this is that Hidan is a nice person. He doesn't have a bad temper or anything in this story. Sorry if you guys get mad and say that I messed up the story right there. But it's my story and I wanted to see what Hidan would be like all nice. I…experimented (hehe that sound weird)
So DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN ANYTHING RELATED TO NARUTOIN ANY WAY…BECAUSE PEIN WOULD HAVE BEEN TAKIN OVER THE WORLD BY NOW. HEHE.
ON WIT DA STORAY! Hope yall like it! :3
Sakura P.O.V.
How in the world could an old lady break her back being still? Don't you do some kind of movement first? Then the lady asked me if I could take care of her dog. My inner said slap her across the face and say that she's crazy, that's not my job. But I obliged. Now, I regret not listening to my inner.
"What do you eat? You have to give me something?" The dog just sat there with its head down looking at the bowl. Its had a cone around its neck. We were in the Kitchen. The television, which was in the living room, right across the hall, was buzzing in the background. Then it got up.
"Are you finally helping me out?" I asked, following.
"*Bark* *bark*." It looked at the television screen. I looked at its direction. There was a commercialon. I held my head down in disbelief and groaned.
"You eat organic dog food?" It nodded like it spoke English.
I sighed, got my shoes, and headed out the door.
"Don't go anywhere." I said before going out the door and locking it.
"The spring time is my kind of season!" I said to myself. I was going to take my sweet time getting that food. Especially when the store is 6 blocks down.
With my hands behind my back, and smelling the nice smell of my flower everywhere, I notice a child calling down the street to her mother.
"Come on Oka-san!" The mom was walking up to the child slowly but surely.
"Stop running. We've been walking for hours!" The mom complained. The child was apparently not listening.
"Hayakushite! Otou-sanis just over there!" She pointed in the direction of her father. The father saw the child and squatted down and spread his arms out. The child ran into the man's arms.
A tear escaped from my right eye but I quickly caught it. That only brought back horrible memories, from long ago…
No! Stop it! Don't remind yourself… but it's too late now. How could I forget that blazing fire that caught everybody in my family but me? The man that caused the fire. The man that slaughtered my whole family right in front of my eyes. His silver hair and magenta eyes. His snowy skin. And that necklace. That dumb necklace. Upside-down triangle with a circle around it. The Jashin religion.
Those dumb people love killing. Only few of the followers get to have what every couple wants in their life. Immortally. They don't get sick, they don't die, make themselves suffer, and they can tear off their limbs without hesitation. It's really stupid. When you meet one, most of them are cute. But you have to remember that they can't have a relationship. Which, to me, defeats the purpose of loving in the first place. They should all be indestructible robots for all I care. It makes no sense.
Once I get in the store, I grab the organic dog food, pay for it, and leave. I better get some great reward when this is over from that lady.
With the food over my shoulder, I get hungry myself. 'Should have grabbed an apple before I left." While mumbling to myself about how hungry I was, I bumped into someone
"Gomen! I didn't mean to-" I looked up to see who I bummed into. The whole world stopped.
"Iie, iie, gomen! It's my fault." He said, "Let me help you up." He held out his hand. At first I was shaking a little, not sure if I could take the hand of my family's killer.
Everything about him was the same. His white hair, magenta eyes, snowy skin. The only thing missing was his necklace. I searched around his neck line and even tried to see if it was in his shirt. Nothing. So I gave in and grabbed his hand.
As soon as we both got up and dusted off, I thought 'maybe he is the killer. Maybe I should try to get it out of him. Maybe he'll remember me and run.'
"Hey do I know you from somewhere? You look familiar." Jashin-boy looked at me confused. Studying my face.
Nothing has really changed about me. It's like I'm a Jashinist myself. I still have my bubblegum hair and apple green eyes. Plump pink lips and snowy skin. The only thing different is my curves and chest.
But he didn't remember anything about me. Not even a little bit. Oh well, I tried. But if I find out that that boy is here trying to kill some people for his stupid religion, then he won't have to remember me.
"Oi, Hidan!" A blond said, along with a red head, a guy with many stitches, a blue haired girl, a guy that looked like Naruto, and…ITACHI?
"The bar is this way you baka!" Blondie and everyone else, walked up to 'Hidan' and me. Then the Blond stop right in front of us. He was very musely and tan. Like a dream guy. I blushed a little.
"Oh, so I see you picked up a friend. Maybe she'd like to go with us." I shook my head.
"No thanks. I have to be going anyway." He shrugged it off and started walking off. And so did the others. Hidan stayed where he was at and so did I.
"So do you and your friends live around here? Are you guys new?" He nodded.
"Yeah we just moved here just a week ago. We all live in the same house." He rolled his eyes when he said that.
"Must be a small house then?" I asked.
"No not at all. It's just that it's me and my friend's house, that stitched up guy. His names Kakuzu. He pays the bill while I make the money. Somehow, they found a way to live with us. They all said that their houses burned down in some weird way. So we let them stay with us. But now I regret it."Hidan said. I chuckled. Now I feel bad for so-called-Jashin-guy.
Then I remembered, "The dog. Oh crap, the dog!" Hidan looked at me and I started to sprint down the street.
He called out to me, "Wait what is your name?" I stopped and looked back.
"Sakura!" Then I turned the corner and ran.
Hidan P.O.V.
Hm, Sakura…have to get to know her. She seems interesting.
Stop it! Now! You know better! Jashin called out to me like he was my mother.
'Nope. And you can't make me.'
You know what will happen. No more 'being handsome forever' anymore!
Oh well! With that, I walked off into the bar with the rest of the gang. I can't wait until he says I can't be immortal anymore. And what was she talking about? I don't remember anything about-
Oh no…
Yay! Done wit da 1st chappieof my 1st story! Sorry it's short. And I just found out something. Sakura is more like Hidan in a way. And Hidan is more like Sakura in a way. Like they swapped places.
Japanese Words Used in the Story:
Oka-san: Mother
Hayakushite: hurry
Otou-san: Father
Gomen: sorry or excuse me
Iie iie: no no
Baka: idiot or stupid (anything mean to the person you are talking to or about)
But anyway please rate and review.
And I'm trying to get at least 30 reviews for each story (not chapters. I just need 30 reviews!). So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE review.
Love yall!
~Annemaylover 3