Pour les français qui ne peuvent pas lire cet OS car en anglais, je ferais une traduction bientôt ;)
For the french out there who can't read this, i'll probably translate it soon ;)
SO ! Hello people ! First time publishing in english ! This a OS that I've done for quite a long time and was corrected by a my dear english teacher ( yes x) ). Since i'm not a native english speaker, I didn't want to publish something uncorrected. Then, You may ask :'' Why would you write in english anyway ? ''. Well, simple; I had to write something for the teacher and so I thought that I could do both, write for you guys and for me. So anyway, you'll enjoy it hopefully :).
Luffy went to the jewelry shop as his mother had asked him to. She wanted him to get her ring back as fast as possible. He had lazily accepted, without a real choice. When he had eventually entered the shop, socked to the bone, he stopped behind the line up and waited for his turn.
Luffy sighed. How long would it take ? He has been there for 30 minutes and he was getting fed up with waiting. There were still three people in front of him. He started to count down. Two people. He got his phone out of his pocket and listened to a catchy music. One person. A new rhythm began in his ear and a wave of sadness overwhelmed him. It was his brother's favourite song. Ace hadn't dropped a line for ages. He was fine, hopefully.
It was finally his turn. He took his headphones off and asked for his mother's ring. As the shop assistant was picking up what he wanted, a man got in, a hood and sunglasses hiding his face. The woman finally handed him the ring. He was about to thank her when the strange looking man pushed him aside, grabbed the ring and pointed his gun at the woman.
'' Would you mind giving me everything you have ? '' he requested grinning.
She immediately accepted. The other customers were in the corner, too frightened to do anything like calling the police. It wasn't the case of Luffy. He dialled the number and was about to call when the robber took it out of his hand.
'' I don't think so ''.
He threw the phone away and looked at him but contrary to what Luffy was expecting, the man just stood there, watching him and his hand trembling. What was wrong ? Did he know him ? Luffy stared at him. Under the hood, he could see black hair and some freackles on his cheeks. He finally understood who he was. He didn't say anything, neither did the man. The thief moved backwards and suddenly ran away. Luffy didn't follow him, he didn't know how to react. He was surrounded by noises but didn't pay attention. He only picked up the ring that the man had thrown on the floor and headed back home.
Few days had passed since the robbery. The burlgar had been arrested and sent right off to jail. Luffy's house was calm. His mother, who had seen the identity of the man on TV, had locked herself in her room. Some nights, Luffy could hear her cry, so he put his headphones on, listening to his brother's song. Somehow, it didn't sound like before. He couldn't think about his brother in another way than this man pointing a gun. Why had Ace become like that ? Why was he like our father ? Luffy was always thinking about these questions. What was he supposed to do ? He loved him because he was his brother. And he hated him because he was his brother.
There we go.
Hope you enjoyed it ! Write me a review if you have time, I would love to know what you thought about this :)
If you like the Robber!Ace thing, I should read '' Rendez-vous en Enfer '', of course if you can read french ! It's absolutly marvelous. :) It influenced me a little, I have to admit ( just with Ace being a robber though ).
Well then, i'll wait for your reactions :) Thanks for reading
~ Have Some Lucky Dreams ~
