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overview 21 year in the future

in space there are many systems many galaxies stars planets

in one such system is the koperal sector

a system In which war has raged between the four factions

the ZERG a hive mind race that seeks to consume the galaxy

the PROTOSS an ancient race that seek to maintain balance

the UED a government army sent to the koprulu sector to take it from the other opposing factions

and the SONS OF KORHAL a terrorist group that wants to claim the koprulu sector for the people of the sector

all of these factions are strong

all these factions manipulated

all but one single mind knows what is to come

the the overmind

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a fire planet

home of a race known only as the zerg

there master the overmind forming strain after strain spinning and weaving

perfecting each as he want along

among the many he had created was his most prized possession

for many years ago in his child hood(or what could be called a child hood of a giant eye )it had stared to the stars wondering and waiting

wanting to explore for it was an unmovable force its swarm having already spread across the planet were growing in size

but that was not enough the overmind wanted something new something intelagent something that could think for its self

and it had found what it was looking for

on a far off world of green at blue

it was a world of many creatures much life

but the most existing thing for the overmind was not the animals but

the creatures know as humans

they could think they could act on there own accord and best of all(for the overmind of course) some had psionic potential. the overmind had never meat such creatures but for all this good there was flaws

the species not as a hole but in a few were greedy corrupt and some even warmongers. and with these few there world was plunged into chaos. city's had been distroyed. continents in rebellion. the entire world was in chaos no land was safe from it. no land not full of it. no land not willing to march on its fellow country and take it for there own. amongst all the chaos there was only one of the many psychic,s could the overmind retrieve. his name Michael L hellhound

his family having been killed in an accident whitch had forced the young boy to live with his aunt and uncle coincidentally forcing him away from his friends

unfortunately there was more

both his aunt and his uncle were drug dealer criminals and drug,es them selves

his aunt who was the main source of the small operation maid most of the money through dubbel crossing and murder

his uncle on the other hand was a constantly causing trouble drawing attention to himself only for him to get caught. but also with him taking the spotlight it keept whatever form of police they had away from Michael aunt

as for Michael him was a decent kid. rather than taking after his grandparents he started learning from his teachers and friends. unfortunately that all changed when his grand parents decided to take away his school funding and instead attempted to get him addicted to pot so they could have him as a backup .that however back fired .when Michael learned where there lab was he reported it to the police and in return got to stay a week in the police station. but unfortunately the city they were in didn't have a adoption center so he was sent back after a week and got a cracked rib and broken leg. he was now thirteen years of age and was attempting to leave his godforsaken uncle and aunt. he was going to make a run for it but his grandparents had other plans

they had implanted him with a dog tracer so they knew where he was all the time

the overmind when learning all this became some what infuriated .how could such beings do this to one another? how could one treat another like dog. wasting no time it created a new evelotion for its overlords . the ability the carry zerg units he wasn't going to destroy the world...yet. but he was going to slaughter the aunt and uncle. also well it was working it thought about how this was going to affect the child he needed to learn but also he needed to make sure he didn't flip when the zerglings come running to his doors. he paused for a moment

what was it going to do

only one solution presented its self

michael

michael had just gotten done with another argument with his uncel about the police . he should know by now that nothings going to stop me from reporting him . he said to him self his fists curling he hated a lot of things but most of all he hated his grandparents . he walked into his room and fell on his bed. he turned around and looked to the ceiling with a frown and started thinking

thinking of what started it all.

he remembered that fate full day.

when his parents and him were driving down the freeway

when the oil tankard fell off and onto there car.

when he miraculously survived the crash but...

his mother and father had been crushed thin with there car

they couldn't tell copse from car

Michael started crying

he just stopped thinking for a moment not wanting to go any further

you have felt pain.

Michael looked up but no one was there. who is it . he said blankly

misery

hello anyone. Michael said looking around

what would you say

the voice paused

if i could make it go away

Michael starred off outside into the nothingness . a small trikel of sweat want down his head.i...i...

calm child. the voice said again in a smoothing tone

michael took a few deep breaths and the asked. who are you where are you and how are you talking to me in my head

you will see soon.it paused again. but your answer it is important if you want to change your fate. the voice said

Michael thought for a moment. he was afraid genuinely afraid but he keep as calm as possible. the minutes felt like hours the hours felt like days. this was his chance. he could trust the voice or he could stay in the hellhole he called home. Michael,s eyes hardened this was is one chance to see his Friends again. i would take that chance.

Michael could almost feel who ever or what ever what was talking to him smile.good now it is my turn to answer. images reached across space into Michael,s zerg the overmind char everything .Michael nearly shit himself.you will be one of us . the overmind said. but the fate i have in mind for you shale be much different from my own . the overmind paused again. i have found a world you can learn. a world you as a small seedling can grow. you shale go and train there you shale become the leader the swarm needs you to be. Michael was slightly existed .now how am i going to get away for my crazy uncle. Michael asked already knowing the answer .like this

outside

on Que three overlords descended from they sky and landed outside Michael,s window . they dropped zerglings that ran from around the two sides and entering the building in force. the door quickly fell and so did the unsuspecting couple . tackling the two drunks the zerglings quickly tor them apart but not before Michael heard there scream's. he closed his and started to smile a smile he hadn't had in years.when do we start.

hi yeah i decided to change this chapter a littel...well a lot

but anyways im going to go through this story to make sure it matches with the this chapter