A/N: Hi this is my first fan fiction I hope you like it J! I know this topic is way over used but I just really love reading about if there was no war and wanted to make my own. Rating T because it's Divergent, but it's clean. Enjoy! (This starts right after Tris and Tobias kiss, just letting you know.) So I reloaded this because for some reason a little bit of the first part got cut off. Anyway it's still kinda short even thiugh I added on to it and I'm sorry about that. I promise longer chapters to come.
Ps. Thanks so much for the 3 reviews I got on the first up load of this, I really appreciated them!
Disclaimer: I'm no Veronica Roth.
I look around to see all the wide-mouthed Dauntless staring at me. Gosh, I hate attention. Tobias seems to note that I'm very uncomferturable and shoots all the people staring a death glare. The people stop staring but don't leave me alone, instaed they start to crowd over to congradulate me. Before I'm pulled into to mob I manage to slip Tobias a quick "thank you" as I get pulled into the crowd. I accept congradulations for what seems like, and probaly was hours. I try me best to smile and say thank you to everyone in a meaningful way, but around my 100th "congrats" I try and just stick to not lashing out on the next person that talks to me. After a while Tobias and I slowly come together again and head on our way out. Before we can reach the door we're stopped by the ugly face of Peter. "Oh I see play the "date the instructor" card and favorite your way up." Peter says before Tobias or I can say a word. "I'd suggest it'd be better for you and me if you'd just leave her alone." Peter gives a kind "whatcha gonna do about it" stare to Tobias and turns back to me. "You better be thankful we're not in the same room anymore or might've been missing an eye tommorow, stiff." Peter says empasizing stiff. "Peter, I'd be' more worried about yourself tonight. I hope you know that I know all my initiates room numbers. I'll also have you know I've had my share of picking locks." Tobias says with a smirk. "Speaking of rooms would you like to find out which ones yours?" "I'd love too" I say and intertwine my fingers with his and walk away from Peter ingnoring the spew of insults coming from his mouth.
I look at the lady sitting at the desk. She's a little older with wrinkles threaghting to pull around her eyes and a few grey hairs here and there, maybe mid to late thirties. "Name please." "Tris Prior." "Ah, 1st ranking congradulations!" she says with a smile. "Thank you" I say really meaning it this time. "Well your number 220. Take your first right at the cafiteria and it'll be on your first left" "Thanks again" I say heading off to my room. "Wait" the lady calls and i turn my head. "Remeber to come tommorow to get your work position." "I will" I say and turn to start walking again.
When I arive at my apartment and unlock it it's completly empty exept for a black bed with deep purple pillows that I can see peaking out of the bedroom. Other than the fact Tobias has deep blue pillows and his looks like someone actually lives there, our apartments are identical. He comes up behind me and wraps his arms around my shoulders. Tobias sighs before saying "Welcome to Dauntless Tris." I turn my head to see him smiling at me and return the smile. Slowly it sinks in, I'm a dauntless member. We sit on the couch that is also black with deep purple cusions. Next thing I know I'm awake in Tobias' arms and it's 10:00pm. I must have fallen asleep after the exhausting day. I look up at Tobias and relize he's awake. I give him a kiss on the check. "I don't wanna sound rude but it's 10:00 you might wanna get back to your apartment." "Yeah, I probaly should." His lips find mine before he leaves and shuts the door soundlessly behind him. I plop down on the huge black bed and fall into a deep sleep before I can even get the covers over me.
I hope you enjoied. Sorry for the relitivly short chapter, it's my first one. I you liked it great, please R&R. If you didn't like it I'm sorry, please leave a review of why you didn't like it so I can improve it.